new tune

paulyc

click my signature to go to my tune in the audio patio, iv updated it loads and need sum constructive criticism!!

DJ Fat Zed

I think the bass is the only problem.

It's got a very flat rhythm. Try and move the rhythm off the movement of the beats. Also you bring in too many low frequency sounds at once.

Pretty good though. Might be nice with a good vocal sample.

dj raptor

so i take it ure not using it as a intro now, just a tune