Can you rate my mates tune please?

[Arrseholio]

Hes after any advice that you lot can supply..

Much appreciated

http://www.oughost.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/Sound4.rm

[ponky]

Hard to say much about the track from such a short sample, but its cute! The mix seems pretty screwy however... The drums are way too quiet compared with the b-line, and the high pitched video game sound is louder still. Hard to say with real audio though, seeing as how it often makes the drums all slushy sounding - better to post a low bitrate mp3 perhaps?

[DJ Fat Zed]

I didn't think that the bassline and sample went together really, I'd try something else. Also you might want to try using little fills and other samples to try and provide some interest to the tune.