The First Form (Thanks for the feedback on earlier tune)

[Jay Beat]

HI all

A feww weeks back I posted a tune called "give it to me" on this forum. Ive taken on board the comments from that post and come up with this tune.

Apologies for the copyright message put over the top of this but its an mp3 of a demo I sent to Zero Productions earlier this week.

James has already given me some excellent advice on how to improveb this tune but if anyone else could offer some more advice it would be greatfully received.

Thanks for your time

Heres the link.

http://www.btinternet.com/~coxell/garage.mp3

Jim

[Fastlance]

oops wrong tune lol