Sonic remix quite good p listen

[Acid-D]

http://dustbrother.host.sk/Acid-D/sonic.ram this is my remix of sonic 2 m8s sed it waz good . has a good tune made from the ring sound plz listen and leave coments

[DJ-Stylus]

Not really feeling the sonic samples mate - they just sound tacky and cheesy. Also they are much too loud and they overpower the rest of the tune.

You need to add structure to the tune. It doesn't have any breakdowns or drop - the bass just comes in after about 8 bars.

The beat is quite nice but like with your over tune - the hats do nothing to help the flow of the tune. You need to vary the pattern a lot more and also try using more closed hats. Also try adding some tambs or something for percussion.

The Bassline sounds lick a duck quacking its a very flat sound and doesn't really bring the bass forward. Either change the sample or try compressing it, filtering it and boosting the low range freqs to boost it up a bit.