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[Deztruction]

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the singin is "Kim English - Missing You"

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[Sen]

Like the crispness of the snares and shakers. Crash could use some more verb/delay. The open hat sounds a bit cheap tho...

The little piano/keys ditty could be dropped a bit in the mix - it's a bit too upfront - clouds the vocals a bit.

Not sure I love the pad sound. May not be essential.

Bass is nice - bouncing with that nice filter sweep at the end.

Can you do a little more vocal edits/cutups?

All in all a quality effort! Nice one!

[Neil aka Riplash]

I could only manage to stream the first 40 seconds or so.. sounds pretty good though man.

I agree with Sen about the keys being too far forward in the mix.

That pad type sound could work with a bit of reverb on it I think, at the moment it sounds a bit disjointed switching between notes.

[Deztruction]

yeah i kno...i shuda sed it wasnt mixed properly!!!!

the reason the pad sounds so wrong is cos i did it in the wrong soft where...it sounds better now..more of a flow 2 it wen it changes notes...

ill try sum more cuttin up of the vocals...


cheers 4 ur comments.