New hiphop one im working on

[Fastlance]

I need some thoughts, help me out?

http://www.f-l-x.net/songs/die%20velleto-01.wma

[Shermon Jones]

not working?!

[BrIsToL bWoY]

yep aint working

[DJ Enta-T]

u and ur bleedin wind samples. this is really moody and atmospheric and sounds good on the drop when it switches up. beat sometimes sounds a little rushed for the vocals and stabs and gallops ahead. u might want some fx in between the stabs in the verse. chorus is deeeeeeep
whos the rapper. keep me updated with this one coz its damn good.

[DJ Fusion]

Yo, im actually feeling this beat you know. One thing tho, I dont like the sound of the piano, the melodies are great but the actual sound sounds a lil cheap? what vst, or piece of hardware you use? Maybe a more artificial sound would work better.
Im SURE this is a Shyne acapella youve put over, sounds cool man.
You got any rappers and artists? Would like to hear something like that.
Overall, v professional, big up m8.

[Dj Vex]

itz heavy but i reckon it wud b considered a remix

keep it tight bruv
~1~

[CLAZZ_A_bEETz]

Id say tone the snare down a touch,

Overall sounding good mate, id

[CLAZZ_A_bEETz]

is this the accapella for the ukmusic.com remix comp?

[Volleyboy]

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