My new tune!!!! please listen

[Acid-D]

http://dustbrother.host.sk/Acid-D/sub2.ram this is the link to my new tune . please leave coments i wona know wot u think

PS: get ready for the bass

[Top$ta]

ok acid first of all

the tune sounds slow
the reason being is uve only used one hat
u need a hat rhythm plus that hat u got there
and another

will sound faster

from what i hear bcos it keeps rebuffering

the bass is niceish not stand out quality

what uve done with the vocals is ok

but sumfin aint right about it,


not a bad tune needs work tho


and regarding my tunes
come on msn and well talk daze_mpk@hotmail.com

[Acid-D]

well its put on lowest quality for uploading easyer i try the thing with the hats ....i like the tune still

iv added u to my msn oh yeah it biginz with mtx

[daveyg]

yes bruv, cheers for listening to mine, i will have a listen later when i get home from work,

Dave

[DJ-Stylus]

Yeah the hat rythm is dry - its the same hat all the way through it gets very repetative.

The bass is okay but its well too loud and distorted.

Also apart from the vocal its just a beat and a bassline - its sounds very dull. Try adding more sounds to fill it out and give it more depth

[Howling]

tune aint bad but the bass need turning down quite alot.

work on this a bit more and you should have a product on your

hands.

[Acid-D]

cheerz

[Sen]

Don't like the sample at all, sorry...maybe cut it up a bit more and make a new phrase out of the words

The bass is ok...needs some more variance.

The hat really needs to be changed.

The track kind of bored me after the bass drop, as nothing new was happening...

Needs some "head elements" - like higher pitched fx

Keep on working!

[lady-j]

i echo sen's comments with only this to add.. sort the 'space' within the tune.

lady j

[bionicbooty]

"Drop Bottom without bottoming out"

Liked that line. Other than that, I agree with sen and lady j, except I have no hate for the hat - but there should be some upper frequency candy in the drums.

[Acid-D]

cheerz for the coments ....the bass line changes .....im working on the tune i may add crop bottom without bottoming out some were else i changed the hat sounds better i thinkin of addin affects for a better tune .....i allso gona do a sonic the headge hog remix (it'l b a laf) more comments plz

[Deztruction]

jus listenin now. the vocal at the start is cool.

the beat is quite cool. altho i agree wid the others. u defs need another high hat in there.

i got 2 52 secs n then it went silent. will try again later.