My Hip-Hop Riddim!!!

[Dinjee Man]

Yeah man made a hip - hop ting,, wanna knw wot u people think of it,, criticism and all that,,
Dinjee
http://www.angelfire.com/pro/djdinje...im__Short_.mp3

[DJ Enta-T]

dramatic hits to start with. they sound alrite, the bass is too raspy and should b further back in the mix. some of the snares sound slightly out to my ear and the shuffle sounds velocity should b dropped. the strings that come in later are good but sound slightly discordant over the intro sounds
when they are sustained its almost right but somethings just not sittin right. its good in fairness betta than i could do anyway

[[agx]]

well I loved the shuffle, as I always do.

This is pretty bland for me tho. Just strings and a one note bass, its nothing more than grime.