my first tune for ya'll to rate

[supersimmo]

well it took my a few hours early in the morning but here it is, the tune was made in fruirty loops and the vocals recorded using N Track.. feedback please

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/supersimmomtmusic.htm

[Tempo]

Easy mate nice to see you finally got it on here!

Yeah i like the tune, maybe need a bit more variation - i like the switch to the 2-step beat

Maybe a change in the basslines pattern at some point in the track too?

Also the slow beat, the first snare sounds too far forward. Try putting it on the 1st beat of the 3rd bar. and see what that sounds like.

The vocals are good but could maybe be better quality. Try adding a little bit of reverb (about 5%) to them.

Keep it up mate good work.

[supersimmo]

thanks... the vocals were rushed and the tune rearranged to suit the mc.... but overall considering my inexperiance at producing a song im quite proud of it... thanks for your comments