LIBERTYX FULL VOCAL REMIX

[paulyc]

THIS IS crap, the bassline is boring and repetitive

the tune is crap.

the strings for the chorus is a rubbish sound.

it took me about 2 hours altogether.

thanks for listening.

(i dont stand a F.ckin chance!!!!! muhahahahaha)

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this is only a first version and it took 2 hours, i will be changing it alot for the proper comp, cos this versions crap.

thanks.

paulyc

[bionicbooty]

If YOU think it sucks, why would you want us to listen? I checked it - I like the beat best when the 16th-note hats are NOT happening.

[paulyc]

because i need feedback on how to improve, iv bin listening to the same tune for 2hours, my ears are immune to ne problems!

thanks for listening mate.

[DJSarki.com]

At least he's honest, and believe me, he is. Were you in that poll for best up n coming producer on the forum? How?

[paulyc]

it took me 2 hours.

[DJSarki.com]

You should get rid of that string that is over most of the verse and chorus, or put some effect on it, but you're better than Stylus mate.

[DJ_Twista]

dats a bit harsh mate....

[DOES IT MATTER]

ummm......the notes that u used were good....not to sure about the guitary sound....it's ok but not bad

[DOES IT MATTER]

sarki, d'you know your name means rice wine in japanese

[paulyc]

stylus is a good producer, at least 10 times better than me.

and sarki, i fall aslep listening to ur tunes. the fact is im 16, your 20 something. therefore making me for my age significantly better than u.

[Slapstcik Comedy]

lol

[DJSarki.com]

Well not really, because at 16 I was in an indie band playing out LIVE and not at Bedroom Nation. But cheers for the comments.

[paulyc]

sad ####!

hahahahahahahahahaha.

[DJSarki.com]

ah i get it .. a type of music you don't like .. = sad

general music skills? you got no idea mate.

ps. not worried, just like to explain these things to make it nice and clear for you

[paulyc]

iv got music skills i been playing piano since about 5.
i used to play drums.

"ah i get it .. a type of music you don't like .. = sad" well u didnt like my tune, therefore u just dissed instead of giving feedback.

$$$$ it m8, i dont want no beef, explain how to improve my tune instead of being a $$$$!

[DJSarki.com]

You know whats wrong with it! You have stated it in your first post!

We both have music skills, well done. I am ultimately more mature though, don't come along here giving it your Mr Big Man act, because it will not impress anyone sunshine.

[paulyc]

.........??

[paulyc]

as i said this took me 2hours, it isnt my proper version.

[dj raptor]

From what u said i thought it would be absolute $$$$, but its actually pretty good. U just need to work on it tho, make it a bit different coz at the moment its nothing special.

[dj raptor]

Erm.... sarki, i think u are taking it a little too seriously. Yes you are older and have been doin it for longer, so u should be better than paul. The fact that it only took him 2 hours to make is pretty impressive considering what it is.

lets just all relax shall we