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[Howling]

Alright Peepz

I have been busy in the lab making some phat HipHop beats and would like your opinions as i'am seriously considering getting these couple of tracks pressed.

http://ra.shockingbreaks.com:8080/ra...aiaan/Grime.rm

This track is almost complete just needs a little bit of touching up

http://ra.shockingbreaks.com:8080/ra...nstrumental.rm

This one is a little bit more laid back than the one above but still a track no doubt


If you could check these out and give me some feedback/comments i would be thankfull....thx


Ps My server only allows one listener at a time for my stream so if you cant lock on first time it means some one else is listening so try later and all should be sweet.

[DJ Enta-T]

first ones not really my style but it sounds alrite. dont like the jungle loops u throw in if they are loops, might not be, and also has a weird flow when the the bongo-ish sounding snare comes in. needs vocals or somethin

couldnt get the second to work

[DJ Enta-T]

ill try again later, like u said.

[Howling]

ok thx for your comments i think the rolling snares compliment
it well but maybe it isnt your taste...i think the jungle loops work but i just need to place them else were in the track to get it more tight if u naw what i mean....obviously these track would sound beter with a rapper but i'am still currently looking for lyricst so if u kno ne1 or any one out there wants to ride these beats lemme know....one

[Fastlance]

To make the first track hiphop, you would need to remove all those jungle sounds, because it just doesnt mix


2nd one doesnt work for me

[Howling]

I will be keeping the jungle sounds they jus need to be arranged better to be more tight sounding.....I fixed the second one so if u could review that i would be greatfull....cheers

[Shermon Jones]

would be good as an intro for a dnb song

but as a hip hop song its not as good as it good be.

[Nukleuz]

i agree.. take out the jungle sounds and replace the bass with a simple sine wave or similar sub..

[Howling]

ok i might discard the jungle loops and change the bass and generally work on it a bit more....what do u think of the second track though....any opinions? thanks!

[Fastlance]

2nd one

Kinda plane and boring, has no instrumentation, AND I REALLY DONT KNOW ABOUT THE BBOXING sounds. its god awful anoying, try and get a little hype in the beat