4/4 REMIX I JUS STARTED. PLZ PLZ COMMENT

[Deztruction]

http://www.angelfire.com/music3/Dezzy/Raindays2.rm


jus started it.

comment plz!

Dezz

[Deztruction]

urm...thanks people.

[Sen]

haha, sorry Dezzy...I haven't listened to a single post since Saturday, I've been sooooo busy...but trust, I will take care of that by the weekend - a full sweep of the patio, me thinks!

(I'm sure it's runnin' - most of your stuff is!)

[General Midi]

yea like this Dez its sounding good..

Where have I heard thet pella before lol

Dont sound too far from being finished mate


All Good

Nick

[Deztruction]

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[Craig v]

yeah its good mate .

I'm just gonna listen to it

brb

[Sen]

ok...finally listened to it.

let's start from the lead sound...a bit too cheesy (if that's possible) - maybe make it a little duller? more mozarella as opposed to cheddar?

like the bass sounds an the sweep pad.

bline is pretty good pattern wise...a subbase would be good to add some feel to it.

Vocals fit well - tuning is good.

Nice tune, good production quality, but not really feeling it overall, you know?

[Craig v]

nice beat but not keen on those high pitched kicks u stuck in there

why did you do that ?

nice though

the synth is a bit trance

like the bass and the vocal stuff

good production quality as usual

change the synth

[Deztruction]

yeah i kno sen. its pissin me off now. i dun a proper house remix(finished now). that im usin really.

(about 2 upload)

the reason i used that synth is cos i cudnt b arsed 2 tune another one.lol same with te sqidgy sound.

i did the beat like trhat cos im a lonely cu.nt

[Deztruction]

http://www.angelfire.com/music3/Dezzy/Raindays.rm

[Brickhouse]

I really like the bassline going on in the speed garage version. I'll concur that the synth line is overly cheesy, and I dig the vocals and they seem to fit well to the music. As far as the "house" version, it sounds like a cross between old Lisa Lisa type freestyle and 99ish Klubbheads type hard house. The vocals are a little too strong for the beat on this one, and once again the synth line is a bit too much, and something feels a bit off with me about the bassline but I can't really put my finger on it. I feel like it's massive cheese, but then again I might not be the one to trust there as I'm not really into UK hard house at all.