y all the waste threads???

G dot RYME

been away 4 a while come bk n theres 2 many wack mcs on here theres a few good 1s but the satandards have dropped.


right check out this lil collab off another forum..



Just a little something.......Feedback/Crits welcome.

Jimmy Rich-

Lying in silence as the stillness draws in tighter/
So much blood loss yet I pull through coz I’m a fighter/
My screams are quieter as I try to move my shoulder/
My legs strapped up yet I continue to march on, a Toy Soldier/
Pain replaced by calmness as I make peace with him/
Mental thoughts stabilise along with my hearts beating rhythm/
Yet my position is fixed, with only thoughts for company/
I’d give my left leg for just the chance to speak to somebody/
Dialects are crossed so words are confusingly lost/
Dr’s thumbs up sign language feels like he’s flipping me off/
Frustrated as I lay prisoner to my own stupidity/
Sitting in my own sweat by day a 100 degree humidity/
My only closeness visits yet cant pull me from my slumber/
Never felt pain like this ask for something to put me under/
I hunger, weight drops from me like leaves from trees in autumn/
Connect blood spots on my sheets into pictures out of boredom/
Can’t sleep for flashbacks the sounds are haunting me/
Can it get worse than this it felt like the devil taunting me/
With help I struggle to my feet, only to pass out my physique is weak/
I wake from unsettled sleep only to hear 2 nurses speak/
Incoherent speech I ache to hear my native tongue/
Push out air as my chest weighs heavy on my lungs/
In the mornings she comes to me, my only sense of peace is her/
Yet Her silhouette to me is somewhat of a blur/
Angel like with healing powers I sense a sign of recovery/
I ask for nothing yet she still continues to smother me/
Body has taken over now my mind is willing it to heal/
Hard to describe what’s going on inside, speak what I feel/
Sometimes I look back asking if it all was real/
Examine the scars I have and my body to me's surreal/
How would I feel if I went under the wheels remains unseen/
Instead I look at life differently and live through the screams…



G.Ryme-

cos the screams were scary,& this aint no $$$$ing movie
but from past events,this $$$$ realy started 2 move me
2 many fears loads of tears,will i live 2 see better years
all this time im waiting on the day,that judgement nears
will i live or die i didnt know then,but i pulled right through
the $$$$ that happened then,is like a miracle 2 me or you
it is so true didnt know wot 2 do,blood 2 much 4 tissue
kinda felt weak cant speak,let alone tell a story 2 a few
people i was equal,before all this madness that took place
ghosty like pasty,blood sweat tears dripping on my face
gotta carry on remain strong,but this seems jus a bit 2 long
but jimmy told ya bout the soldier in he,just watch him walk on