work in progress...

I-RoNiK

I jus found this on my computer, titles 'work in progress' ... not the actual name.. jus somethin i guess that never quite got finished.. it's about a year old, hell i cant even spit dis good no more!! well anyway I would love to know what ya think.. ?

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2 stubborn MINDS/ stop playin GAMES/ they both ADMIT TO DEFEAT/
coz they/ OUTPLAYED EACH OTHER/ couldn't HANDLE THE HEAT//
so broke the/ BANK and spent their/ 50's ON A S-U-V/
but what good is the motor/ WITHOUT/ THE IGNITION KEY?//
i give you my 2 CENTS/ but the rest won't COME FOR FREE/
cuz I/ "BUY"/ into all dat FATE AND DESTINY//
an some things in dis LIFE/ i FIND/ are JUST MEANT TO BE/
but who can DISTINGUISH/ between DREAMS and REALITY?//
guess you could say that its been WRITTEN IN THE STARS/
although I started TO/ believe it's TRUE/ THAT MEN ARE FROM MARS//
and that us/ FEMALES ARE FROM VENUS/
but i still got your back no matter WHAT PLANET'S BETWEEN US//

tryna deal with COMPLICATIONS/ in this MESS THAT I'M IN/
i've LEARNT/ that when you BURN/ it's not IMPORTANT WHO WINS//
CORRECTIN all my ERRORS/ start to TAKE IT ON THE CHIN/
lookin for the answers but tell me "WHERE DO I BEGIN"?//
could hear a PIN DROP/ IN THESE SILENT SURROUNDINGS/
coz my/ THOUGHTS speak louder then my/ VOICE IT'S SO CONFOUNDING//
SO CONFUSED/ over this place that I BEEN FOUND IN/
but ya/ JAW still hits THE FLOOR/ because my RHYME IS SO ASTOUNDING//

stuck on the/ CATCH 22/ BENDING RULES UNTIL WE BREAK EM/
still undecided on which/ ROUTE SHOULD BE TAKEN//
thats why it's/ TIME TO TRY/ AN GET MY/ LIFE BACK ON TRACK/
too easy to blame it on/ SOMEFIN/ THAT CAN'T ANSWER BACK//
an i guess/ courage is a QUAL-I-TY THAT I LACK/
but now it's time to go/ FACE TO FACE WITH THE BLACK//
cuz i've LEARNT/ IT AIN'T ALL WHITE/ there'll always BE THOSE SHADES OF GREY/
jus gotta LOOK A LITTLE DEEPER/ cuz/ WE DON'T ALWAYS DISPLAY//
THE WAY we feel on the outside/ so many FEELINGS INTERVENING/
but in this play on words YOU'LL FIND/ EVERY LINE HAS A MEANING//

I-RoNiK

Haha!!!!!

quite "Ironically!" I have just found the edited version... lol lemme know which is better!



got the weight of the world on my shoulders
its cold inside but outside its gettin colder
a year older i've learnt we all make mistakes
an no matter what happened
never too late to make a change
but let me ask you just how long does it take ya?
would've been quicker to get a flight to jamaica
to make or break ya
i know you think sarcasm is the lowest form of wit
but that's me I can't reform for you not even when I spit
an I believe in all dat fate and destiny
cuz some things in dis life i find are just meant to be
guess you could say that its been written in the stars
although I started to think it's true that men are really from mars
and that us females are from venus
but i still got your back no matter what planet's between us
but wen pushed to the limits the cracks start to appear
so we give up hope, cant cope so we turn to the beer
the fear of losin its just too much to take
and the promises we made become too big to break
so we faked it but we got there in the end
welcome to reality no more time to pretend
otherwise we'll bend the rules untill we break em
still undecided on which route should be taken
thats why it's time to try an get my life back on track
too easy to blame it on somethin that can't answer back
i guess courage is a quality that I lack
but now it's time to go face to face with the black
cuz i've learnt it ain't all white
there'll always be those shades of grey
an I don't come cheap but thats the price u got to pay
the day 2 stubborn minds finally meet
stop playin games they both admit to defeat
outplayed each other couldn't handle the heat
now all theyre left wit is bittersweet memories.