Whos Sayyin What? Whos Got Raw Talent Lets See?

[NORTHWESTMC]

Yessss Yesss im new on here i have laid a few bars down on threads as it is but now i wanna see some talent on a thread I can keep my eyes on im 17 but I know i can spit so lets see what we got we are UK MC'S we murder any other country so lets show dem!!!!!!!

GET TA KNOW ALSO send me a message or summat

blessssssss

[BLASTHEME]

you soft as babyfood,/homey i'll eat'cha krew
i'll rep philly by myself/u must be thinkin im new
you did that call out for battle/but'chu aint spit shyt ta show seriousness
then i appeared/you disappeared jus like mysteriousness
you're soft like noodles/but twistid like uh philly pretzel
dirty blond hair got'chu lookin like uh bytch named gretel
Hans an Gretel from tha kiddie korner fairy tales
just like ya rhymes/fictionalized/you ride tha Hairy Trail
North Pole/split'cha azz when those fellas bend'ja
dont be talkin bout you're gangsta or ninja/mr miss pre-tender
i'll end'ja wit tha swiftness like Rob/im an Ex-ecutioner
this is preliminary for kickz/i aint really got into abusin ya


YET!!! LMAO....

[NORTHWESTMC]

you soft as babyfood,/homey i'll eat'cha krew
i'll rep philly by myself/u must be thinkin im new
you did that call out for battle/but'chu aint spit shyt ta show seriousness
then i appeared/you disappeared jus like mysteriousness
you're soft like noodles/but twistid like uh philly pretzel
dirty blond hair got'chu lookin like uh bytch named gretel
Hans an Gretel from tha kiddie korner fairy tales
just like ya rhymes/fictionalized/you ride tha Hairy Trail
North Pole/split'cha azz when those fellas bend'ja
dont be talkin bout you're gangsta or ninja/mr miss pre-tender
i'll end'ja wit tha swiftness like Rob/im an Ex-ecutioner
this is preliminary for kickz/i aint really got into abusin ya


YET!!! LMAO....

Whos this boy saying s**t on a track
Il mix a little bit of grime
with a little bit of rap
sniff a llitle bit of crack
and a little bit of smack
you cant fault me
coz im puttin in the graft

cos your in danger
a baby straight to your manger
il come to you gaff with a 12 gauge ya
wot d**k haed do us a favour
i make M.C's screeeaaaammm arghh
more than a woman in labour
im not in star wars
but a got a light saber
So dont come with that $$$$ head TRACK

cos you might make me lose it
come lets do this its all about the music
yeah im juicy just like a fruit is
yeah am musical just like acoustic


yeahh boiii bla bla
BoooooOOooommMMMmmmmm

[Hoodzy]

Blastheme killed you off,
Fall back (Y)

[dagsz]

Blastheme killed ur ass bi7ch

[kd0t]

haha he merked you in the past and ruined your future. You still need to focus on your layout why you writing in 7's?

Also grime bars look swag online, especially if you write them hype lyrics that sound decent vocalised but are $$$$ writtens.

You yung'uns need to learn the basics still this is your verses:

7 + 9 + 4 = 20

at least you brought it back to an even number by the end but some of your rhymes are off.