Who wants to battle me? Bring it on!

[TrulyMe88]

Welcome to the party, I'm here to rock-the-beats
Get up off-your-seat and dance with me, my raps won't stop-ya-feet
To cop-the-preach would be like me without a chance-to-help
No need to enhace-new-wealth, 'cuz I just advanced-ya-health
Let's not dance-to-lose, I can't afford to get-beaten
My chants-move-crews when they think their-sh*t's-creepin'
High to make the others feel inferior-with-consent
And when a girl gets hot you gotta hear-her-with-content
I'm like the-hot-sun, I produce heat like-a-furnice
My acapella-shots-won as my harmony with rise-to-earn-it
My eyes-are-burnin' as I feel there's too-much-light
The bass comes in, we're bad as hell to even do-such-right
I dream-when-I-sleep, but yet it seems-then-I-creep
When I fantasize over things that nearly-can-drive-grief
The day turns-to-night as everyone says, "let's learn-grooves-right!"
The beat's so loud enough, it couldn't even firm-two-dykes

[LyRiCaL_SoLdIeR]

yea il give it a go..

Ayo, u wont be Around Forever//
If u stay eating cupcakes, ice cream, and Mounds Of Cheddar//
ur Round As Ever,// and the more Pounds The Better//
I swear with all those food stains is how u Found That Sweater//
yeh im chattin bout u, fat boy try n Stop Me//
ur Sloppy, im thin Not u, ur az big as ur Block Be//
im gon murder u $$$$$ cuz u aint fond of the basis//
'truly me' face it//
you were a $$$$ m.c that why you turned to being a rapist//
the firs technique you learnt was when you took yo dad up his anus//
you were experience and "fo reel" to enhance yo song//
to get deeper on the details you practiced on yo mom//
but $$$$a that juss another segment//
you ordered an abortion fo yo sista cuz you knew you got her pregnant//
dont even use the excuse you turned to be a rapist cuz yo dad teased you//
you laid yo dog, and you knew you had the talent from the beggining and it pleased you//
'your here to rock the beats'? get real kid?//
my words will rip you, better then you could rip lilttle boys anuses//
so quit lyin in shame playin those perverted games//
cuz tha ghost here spittin sparks and those fiery flames//
haha i know you $$$$d lil boys you called tha J Preist//
when lil boys confess to you its their $$$$ that you feast//
even tho ur twisted, il give u sum credit at least//
$$$$ this battle, giv lyrical sum peace//

safe

[TrulyMe88]

Yo, I read your pro and saw your website, it seems like you're-the-sh*t
You not only cure-a-$$$$ but with the girls you earn-the-lips
You burn-the-tips to become the best in your-own-time
It's cool you're bi don't ask me why, maybe you sure-show-crime
I allure-yo-mind and it's not so hard for me to-diss
You-b*tch, I'm just playin around, I'm just ready-to-bliss
I'm naturally-coo'-sh*t, I'm at the end of the line-I'm-out
You're an awesome chick, remember it, that's what this rhyme's-about

No hard feelings. you seem cool. Big up. =)

[SonniJim]

hahaha...okok...

You don't deserve a reply but Ima give it anyway,
enough of this half ass lyrical foreplay,
you're straight faking- breaking laws of microphone honesty
you ought to take a vow of silence check in at the monastary
Yor style is bandwagon and far behind me you be lagging,
you be smoking n choking on what I'm growing n bagging

It's Billy Bad Man - that's 2 Bees and an MC made you sad, man,
cheered on by everyone like i was Shaft and you a klansman
send for the hangman! its time to string up the fake badman,
living in a land of dreams but lyrically I be the sandman.

A dark hearted warrior, dream destroyer, ????ing madman,
My style is like breakdancing yours is similar to cancan,
My style is Lotus esprit yours is like the white-van-man,
look to my right - you see the Sundance kid is my right hand man!

...hahaha...si mi YAH!!

[The Fool]

Nasty dollars... Owweeeeeee

[real_deal_paji]

sonni jim spittin heavy man
makes it everyfink else look like they jus begun rap skule 101

[TrulyMe88]

Here's one of my old raps I made a while ago. It's not new so if you hate it, forgive me, I am trying to get lessons by MC_Razer to rap. Haha. Lol.

"Who do you think you are? Some kinda-playa? A-slaya?
That's why i gave you up, you got pissed when i said a-praya
Another reason why is you were usin'-me and confusin'-me
I thought you were the one I wasn't losin'-'please?'
Do me a favor and stop your pathetic behavior
'Cuz I'm not ya-chick, you're just a-$$$$$ and you make me sick
I'm not the one you need, I'm not the one to please-you
I'm just a b*tch who only wants to tease-you"

Tell me what you think? That was my old rap. You think I should stick to those type or learn new stuff?

[LyRiCaL_SoLdIeR]

yea i think it was a good rap stil. keep it up

[TrulyMe88]

You think I should do newer styles of rap like MC_Razer? I got my newer ones from his style b/c his all are very outstanding.

[LyRiCaL_SoLdIeR]

whateva u feel wud b better, wateva u prefer! personally i dont see nutin wrong eith the above

[SonniJim]

as endorsed by the Real_Deal, flipping rhymes peole feel,
slipping like banana peel from denmark hill to tulse hill,
I be playin an slayin an prayin to get my point accross
the only living boy in New Cross, call me the big boss!

but Truly-Me? fromm '88 to present date,
I been dropping spit specifically designed to devestate
so don't hate, I'm the tastiest meal on this dinner plate,
while I'd hesitate to use your sorry ass as fish bait

like the ice pick to Trotsky to your head I'm penetrating
you could call it fate as on your feeble rhyming I be skating
I'm prepared to fight heavyweight, nah no time fo featherweight
I be hitting on your chevy chase while sipping on a bevvy, Mate!

...big up, girl, the title of this thread is battle, right? keep it coming..

[TrulyMe88]

here's another one of my old raps. i am working on newer ones so i will post them soon. =)

"Well, I can't believe I thought that you meant everything to-me
But since I know the truth I hope you suffer naturally
Although this is so mean but I think you're so f*cked up and stupid
You say you wanna change your name so go and change it to Cupid
You always used to tell me that I should change my look
Well maybe you should look up 'idiot' in the book
'Cuz that is what you are, you are not any star
You'll never be my friend again 'cuz this is the-end, uh"

Feedback anyone?

[TrulyMe88]

You guys are just a bunch of mothaf*ckin ass-cracks
The only ones who'd make me wanna lay-back
Thinkin' 'bout all the sh*t you b*tches put me-through
Makes me wanna kill someone so bad that be-a-crew
Maybe a-few-or-two might be worth-livin'
But the rest a y'all should die and rot in hell, you're pure-$$$$tin'
My raps may not be the best right now, but hell, I'm tryin'
Someday I'll be a star and flick y'all off so much and laugh when ya dyin'
So to those of you who don't appreciate Miss Bitter-$$$$$-Me
Then get the f*ck outta here or I'll f*ckin' lit-yo-witch-be on fire
I am certainly not in a good mood so don't f*ck-around
Just don't f*ckin' talk to me, I got more f*ckin' luck-through-town

By the way, this rap isn't towards you guys. You guys are cool sh*t. It was towards people on www.neonteen.com who were being dykes. Lol. Feedback anyone?

[TrulyMe88]

My name is Eclipse and I am back to get-this-on
I'm not a b*tch-with-thongs, I'm coo' cuz my sh*t-lives-on
I'm not a bad accuse of a human being so-get-lost
Ya just some h*es-with-gloss, now don't be showin'-it-tuh-ya-boss
My life is not-a-sin, it's the greatest gift-from-God
My boy may have shot-ya-chin probably cuz he lifts-one-rod
Ya sh*t's-gone-soft, ya life is fulla lies-and-disgrace
I ain't outta-place but I'll hit you till ya dyin'-this-way ---> b-(

Again, this is towards the people on neonteen who are rude. Lol.

[TrulyMe88]

I''m sweet-yet-neat, ya can't wait-tuh-meet
I'm deep-get-me outta this scene-ya-freak
I sleep-tuh-keep my brain as smart-as-hell
Don't you think you're gonna get away with that part-of-council
Ya nothing but a Freak Thang, you know I'll knock-ya-out
I beat anything and everything that might rock-about
Ya think you're the-winna but ya nuttin' but a-sinna
Ya never do anythin' worth hearin', you're as ugly as a-trimma

Yet again, this is to the people at neonteen. Lol. Any feedback?

[oxy']

truley ya ok, but i think you need to stop goin around the same ol topic, change things up a bit, leave somting to da imangination.

ya rhymes come across to obvious...just my opinion, but i like ya hunger and determination.

[TrulyMe88]

Yeah, but I'm still learning to rap better. I'm in the stage of that anyways. =)

[oxy']

kool..well just keep on doin what ya doin,,, but read up about how to write poetry, theres some really good tips on makiin ya lines simple but effective.

[TrulyMe88]

Yeah, thanks, man. I'll try that. Big up, dude. Lol. I think my luck has almost run out on me with this whole rap thing I'm tryna do. I can't think of any good raps that will blow people away. =( Got any ideas?

[The Fool]

Yep... If u kill someone cut them up put them in a suitcase with weight discs hire a boat and dump the suitcase in the middle of the ocean...

if ur lookin for ideas on how to rap, learn from the greats develope your own style, learn from up and comin artists