what do you think of htis verse?

mr grant

Why “spit” with the GLOCK OR THE CHROME – you’re either STOPPIN OR SLOW – I’m a POPULAR HOST – of my new hit show; it’s called “OFF OF THE DOME” – Why battle? Don’t even BOTHER TO FLOW – I FATHERED IT SO – when you say your “coming sick” you mean from a DOCTOR WITH NOTES! (Posers) – now I’m SLAUGHTERIN MOST – Mother Nature crafted my art, now I’m DROPPIN HER POST – Ya’ll are SHOCKIN HER THOUGH – Thanks…you had her “jaw dropped” so I could stick my $$$$ IN HER THROAT! – Battling kids? Ha! It’s FUNNY TO SON THEM – Give me fat chicks … for MONEY ILL F*CK THEM! - I’m spitting lines that are “ahead of my time” … I MUST BE IN LONDON! (6 hours ahead) – I’ll SPIT IN YA CRANIUM – a reason to SLIT WRISTS? “I’M HATING HIM” – Either than SARS, I’m the “SICKEST CANADIAN!” – You can’t STEP ON MY LEVEL KID – I’m the BEST, HONEST LETTERMAN – and with this sh!t, I’m the TEXT GOD AND RHETORIC – I’ll DAMAGE YOUR BRAIN AND F*CK WITH – your RAMBLING $$$GOT HUSBAND – I’m SMASHIN HIS FACE LIKE PUMPKINS - I’m from the ‘jump off’ .. come to CANADA, “EH”, IT’S BUMPIN! – So I HEAR A LOT OF THESE “THUGS” – are FEARED AND POPPIN SOME SLUGS – I’ll leave your brains SMEARED, NOW MOPPIN THEM UP – like a womens cycle, I’ll leave you PERIODICALLY F*CKED! – I’ll end this by saying CHEERS…NOW SLOBBER DEEZ NUTS! –

^^ well I wrote the end of this in class and yes, it is a key’d verse =D

laura_buff

mr grant

^^^ that good or bad?

Sharpie

good

DaRk_Ch0c0!at£

not bad!