Tugsy V I-Ronic

Tugsy

FINAL..
You gotta' drop first seen as you haven't had
to battle anyone yet, yuh get me.. Safe
A poll will be set up at the end of the battle.Kk

I-RoNiK

TUGSY// Win or LOSE you can't deny you have NO HAIR//
an// what possessed YOU to join these BOARDS with a NAME like a CARE BEAR?//
look at// what we got so FAR// you're A// balding kids TV STAR
I cussed you plenty//an we only in the 4TH BAR//
so now i'll tone it DOWN// cuz I think// we cud be a tag TEAM//
does this feel// LIKE i'm interpreting// a 14 year olds DREAM?//
cuz if so yo better// WAKE UP// an live in the REAL WORLD//
you just been MURKED BOI// coz you CAN'T// HANDLE the rhymes I HURLED//

Tugsy

Get yuh face KICKED IN/ Get placed IN A BIN/ Give yuh a 'chelsea smile' have a ever lasting GRIN/
Come I merk ANYTHING you BRING/ Come I buss yuh face in with my SWING/
Yuh BARS make me LAUGH like MR. BEAN/ When I slew I make shore I do it PROPER/
Replying I wouldn't even BOTHER/ You'll find I-Ronic down at yuh local 'HAPPY SHOPPER'/
Or at 'Burger King' giving shines to a 'BIG WHOPPER'/ Yuh friendly SHELF STOCKER/
Yuh average 'peodaphile' that looks like 'ROY CROPPER'/ Yuh local asshole THROBBER/
Yuh home town SHOCKER/ I-Ronic my flows way HOTTER/ Tugsy the pote SHOTTER/
I-Ronic yuh bedroom HORROR/ The kiddy ROBBER/ Yuh get merked and I wont STOPPER

mr grant

I RONIK

TUGSY// Win or LOSE you can't deny you have NO HAIR//
an// what possessed YOU to join these BOARDS with a NAME like a CARE BEAR?//

^^^ lol pretty good punch i guess, care bears are dope haha. the no hair looked forced, does he ACTUALLY not have hair? hehe

look at// what we got so FAR// you're A// balding kids TV STAR
I cussed you plenty//an we only in the 4TH BAR//

^^^ lol $$$$iness, i love it ... once again, if he is NOT bald it is worthless

so now i'll tone it DOWN// cuz I think// we cud be a tag TEAM//
does this feel// LIKE i'm interpreting// a 14 year olds DREAM?//

^^^ haha, this was pretty funny, you should try using multis though

cuz if so yo better// WAKE UP// an live in the REAL WORLD//
you just been MURKED BOI// coz you CAN'T// HANDLE the rhymes I HURLED//

^^^ meh, this wasnt really a punch ... with such a short verse you should trying to be throwing the bes tyou can with a short verse

Tugsy

Get yuh face KICKED IN/ Get placed IN A BIN/ Give yuh a 'chelsea smile' have a ever lasting GRIN/
Come I merk ANYTHING you BRING/ Come I buss yuh face in with my SWING/

^^^ lol chelsea smile eh, thats grousume ... there was no real creative punch here, not bad

Yuh BARS make me LAUGH like MR. BEAN/ When I slew I make shore I do it PROPER/
Replying I wouldn't even BOTHER/ You'll find I-Ronic down at yuh local 'HAPPY SHOPPER'/

^^^ mr bean again? lol ... i dont get the punch, whats an ironic at the happy shopper?

Or at 'Burger King' giving shines to a 'BIG WHOPPER'/ Yuh friendly SHELF STOCKER/
Yuh average 'peodaphile' that looks like 'ROY CROPPER'/ Yuh local asshole THROBBER/

^^^ lol shelf stocking is a bad job, i use to do it. haha asshole throbber

Yuh home town SHOCKER/ I-Ronic my flows way HOTTER/ Tugsy the pote SHOTTER/
I-Ronic yuh bedroom HORROR/ The kiddy ROBBER/ Yuh get merked and I wont STOPPER

^^^ no real punch here

mr grant

OVERALL

both need to work on focusing on punchlines ... with such short verses you need to come good EVER line, no taking breaks.

flow - tie
punches - ironic
creativity - tie (neither)
entertainment - ironic
multis - tie (neither)

VOTE = IRONIC

HONEST vote ... thats how they should ALL be broken down

good battle, keep elevating

I-RoNiK

why don't ya TRY and LEARN from your MIS-TAKES//
I make ya STARVE so much you CRY coz you MISS STEAK//
It's a// PISS TAKE// the way that ya// $$$$ TASTES//
walkin round like a// $$$$ TRACY// spittin TOXIC WASTE//
it's INSANE// the way yo// rhyme can CHANGE//
I know I left it long but 'ad nuffin DECENT to EXCHANGE//
an EITHER WAY// don't mean $$$$ because I BEAT YOU//
so STOP chattin back like NO-ONE CAN DEFEAT YOU//

Tugsy

Okay, Okay I got merked, but $$$$ Im 14..Yuh Get Me Im still coming up. Yeah.. This aint a battle verse just some little thing..

My 'avater' should say MASTER/ My murderous bars INCASE yuh in PLASTER/
And as for the Tag Team YES is my ANSWER/ Im on another ELEMENT/
If anything I Ronik yuh far from ELEGANT/ 14 but my flows are way more INTELLIGENT/
Yuh bars aren't slewing ANYTHING there way IRRELEVANT/ There way too SWAG/
See me on road yuh better be GRIPPING yuh HANDBAG/ Clashing me's like LION V KITTEN/
My bars SICKEN/ I spit fact not FICTION/ So be aware of THIS/
Be on yuh P's & Q's next time I come LEWES/ No jokes when Im AROUND/
Im the sort of person to 'stamp' on yuh head with my 'pumps' when yuh DOWN/

Tugsy

Grant at the HAPPY SHOPPER bit I meant shes a P.A.K.I I aint being racist but something that just come up..

I-RoNiK

ite!!! Tugsy who you kiddin? that verse is deep!! so was yo first one.. honest a swear down, propa feelin em both!

Tugsy

Down yuh wanna up a Poll then I mean its up to you..?