TOURNI:: J-KID vs RASKET BOY

IdE-iLL

8 To 16 Bars

Rasket_Boy

Kk.___
We can see your a fat sh!t, so f_ck debating BLUD
But is that lips below your nose or a couple mating SLUGS?/
Anyway I aint got beef with anyone much but its you I DISPISE
Plus the fat above your eyebrows is causing landslides over your EYES/
Yuh rhymes so 'SOFT' its like yuh 'SPITTING FEATHERS'
Actually not surprising seen as Im battling a look-alike of 'NUTTY PROFESSOR'/
Anyway whatever, slewing me's impossible, its a major TASK
To put it into words its like a baby wiping his own ARSE/
Forget that, EXCUSE ME J-KID have you got a remedee for my BOREDOM
TRUTHFULLY YUH BASIC a legend for the worst bars on this FORUM/

J-kid

ur new to dis sight nd u wana batl a real lyricist, 1 of da best
ders 2 ways ul learn either revise sum rhymes or get laid out 2 rest
cus Im sik im carsenagenic i leave u wid different types of cancer
ul b in hospital dyin while im unsteadly poppin like a drunk breakdancer
but i wont b popin dance moves dey will b little 2mm bullets aimed at ur mout
som how ima stop u spitin cus wen u talk u leave everything dry like a drought
nd we cant hve dat cus da world needs water to reproduce nd survive
but ur makin the world a more $$$$ier place every second your alive
ur a bit obsesed wid fat u cant stop talkin bout size heaviness nd weight
but ur gals expandin every day she swallows my cum at a reall fast rate
dis was jus a little expeience a litle taster of wat im about
but 1nce again ask ur gal cus ive already bin in her mout

IdE-iLL

ok ima vote rasket boy, that was close though. but im sure ive sin j-kid cum a lot better dan that before.

j- kid try mek ur bars shorter and focus on gettin more multies it sshould flow more.

yeh rasket u came gud try focus on bein more clever wit ur punchlines try aim them at things that are actually true.

safe both of ya good battle.

J-kid

yeah ur gona say dat but lets get sum views frm ola mcs del get wer im comin frm

IdE-iLL

ite den dats jus ma opinion

IdE-iLL

j-kid wats ur reason for voting for yaself?

Rasket_Boy

Ayjay I writ my verse on a word document so I couldn't see J-Kid's profile or anything because it said the server was busy or something..
I vote for me as J-Kid's voted for himself and I think although my verse was short it came hard with every bar and J-Kid wasn't as good with his flow, punchlines etc..
Safe yeah.

V/ RASKET BOY

IdE-iLL

kk den safe.

pappi

i did sum looonnng explanation, but accidently clikd a button nd i cudnt get it bk, cnt b fukd 2 do it all agen soz,
but i go 4 rasket becoz i preffered his flo, nd although j-kid came betta in da last 4 barz (in fact i fink dem last 4 were hevi 4rm j-kid) rasketz punches were hittin harder throughout his verse.

vote = Rasket

pappi

wen i say 4 bars i mean 4 lines ite,
kl

I-RoNiK

j - kid -

i fort that ur lyrics seemed to link better altho the flo was hard to grasp cuz of d way its been written... its hard to read it cuz it looks like it all follows on an ya cant tell where the bar ends an a new one begins!!
also mebbe try 2 shorten dem an get more of a feel ... maybe u should try countin syllables? dats how I do it sumtimes.
but I did like ur punchlines alot fink if it was edited slightly could be a lot better.

Rasket boy -

u prob had a slight betta flow.. but u shud try not 2 use words like 'anyway' cuz its a waste of a potential punchline... (im jus tryin 2 help btw.. an am a hypocrite cuz I do it all the time too! lol) but its easier to judge otha ppls verses den ur own. couple of your bars were jus nonsense to me....

"Forget that, EXCUSE ME J-KID have you got a remedee for my BOREDOM
TRUTHFULLY YUH BASIC a legend for the worst bars on this FORUM/"

you had some good punchlines too but lak ayjay sed wud be better if dey were actually tru too.


My vote goes to ... J-Kid

Sharpie

i fink rasket boy for the same reasons as ayjay. i fink j kids bars were WAY to long it woz kinda hard 2 read compared 2 raskets. i also fink rasket had better punchlines

vote = rasket