Three

[clarky241]

These are lyrics for a space-rock song I am hoping to create in the very near future called Three. It's so named because Earth is the third planet from the Sun. Here are the lyrics, please give your honest opinion:

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Scouring the galaxy for sources of calamity
Dusting off the comets with a spray of silver bullets
What is to become of us?

Storming through starlights with white lasers for headlights
Crumbling every world, amidst the dark the stars were hurled
What is to become of us?

And the skys, they burn!
With no-one is concern
And our world is held to ransom
So wretched yet so hadsome
And the sky is left to burn

Toppling over molten clouds without a single trace of stolen sound
Angering the socialists with a controversial killing list
What is to become of us?

And the skys, they burn!
With no-one is concern
And our world is held to ransom
So wretched yet so hadsome
And the sky is left to burn

Target aqquired
Goodbye
Home sweet home after all
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[Bane]

Hmm to me it looks like it lacks focus and I can't catch the flow of it (that might be cos im reading it as bars rather than lyrics).

Think you could find an instrumental that fits it so I can understand what type of song it is?