24-11-2002, 07:54 PM	#1
Fidel Castro Xenophon Loki Alter-Ego Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 490	This Why I Think I'm One Of The Best Lyricist On This Forum. I just want to die/ no-one would care, if I went without sayin goodbye/ what do I have to live for/ my life is like a revolving door/ people usin my emotions like kids use toys/ mentally scarred for the rest of my life, by the bullin schoolboys/ everyday is a personal struggle wiv my heart & soul/ do I have sign on my head sayin, gimme some more/ bustin my heart out thru my rhymes/ this is how I feel, even in the good times/ loner ever since I was born/ people sacrificing my friendship like a chess pawn/ no longer is their anyone I trust/ keeping my pent up aggression & emotions hush hush/ everytime I let some in/ my personal life get flipped 180 degrees like I was the one livin in sin/ my kindness is always used/ and my heart feels abused/ never let down a person who I had called friend/ all my friendships gets dissolved at the end/ humiliated so often, I can’t take another one/ that’s why, i have chosen the afterlife, as the place that i have gone. Last edited by Fidel Castro : 24-11-2002 at 08:20 PM.

24-11-2002, 08:37 PM	#2
Exzes UKMusic.com Editorial Team Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 3,538	if you wanna just die, then just do it, nobody cares about your life, so don't go thru it, spitting in limerick format, you're a modern day joke, you're just feeding the fire, adding more heat to the smoke, you shouldn't make attack so easy, catch a lyrical stroke, you think you're one of the best, i'm here to inform you, you ain't quite what you think, if only you knew, you ain't ready for this, so get back in your bedroom, sorry if i'm being harsh, but you're sure to of found out soon, mommy putting you to sleep, wake up just after noon, your lyrics wouldn't be colorful even if they appeared in cartoon, digital imagery, let's paint a mental picture, check the mc graveyard, for this, i'm certain will inflict you, make you go back to the drawing boards, like all good children, just remember great things take many attempts before they done, coming straight on the boards, and trying to take my crown? what you want $$$$$? pull up a seat, sit your ass down, i'll let you know when you're ready, like ale, you'll ferment, take a while to flourish, in the meantime repent, for the sins that you've partaken, like lying straight up, you ain't one of the best, so just shut the $$$$ up This Why I Think You're Not One Of The Best Lyricist On This Forum

24-11-2002, 08:44 PM

Fidel Castro

Xenophon Loki Alter-Ego

Join Date: Mar 2002

Posts: 490

“
Originally posted by Exzes
if you wanna just die, then just do it,
nobody cares about your life, so don't go thru it,
spitting in limerick format, you're a modern day joke,
you're just feeding the fire, adding more heat to the smoke,
you shouldn't make attack so easy, catch a lyrical stroke,
you think you're one of the best, i'm here to inform you,
you ain't quite what you think, if only you knew,
you ain't ready for this, so get back in your bedroom,
sorry if i'm being harsh, but you're sure to of found out soon,
mommy putting you to sleep, wake up just after noon,
your lyrics wouldn't be colorful even if they appeared in cartoon,
digital imagery, let's paint a mental picture,
check the mc graveyard, for this, i'm certain will inflict you,
make you go back to the drawing boards, like all good children,
just remember great things take many attempts before they done,
coming straight on the boards, and trying to take my crown?
what you want $$$$$? pull up a seat, sit your ass down,
i'll let you know when you're ready, like ale, you'll ferment,
take a while to flourish, in the meantime repent,
for the sins that you've partaken, like lying straight up,
you ain't one of the best, so just shut the $$$$ up

This Why I Think You're Not One Of The Best Lyricist On This Forum
”

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

see thats why you are the best lyricist on this forum.

i have just proved my point.

thank you for partispating.

24-11-2002, 08:45 PM	#4
Exzes UKMusic.com Editorial Team Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 3,538	haha, cheers man, sorry if i came across as evil, i didn't mean to

24-11-2002, 08:48 PM	#5
geenius Registered User Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 189	brought up surounded by drugs every dad a battle stat between thugs// a person's dead same ol' storie all u can say if ya prayers// 1 less in the area every1 soon will be hystaira// walk down to the shops see dis white boy nick sum nike tops// he get caught by the cops ava look around for 1 min dis is a flop mates bin ere den gone// y do we have to be seperated by skin it juss makes everything boil up there is evil wivin // sumfing need to be done children cant go out have fun// when the sun starts to drop and night cum// outside sittind down hearing arguments between children and mums// y were we brought up in the slum oo lord please tell me y u have put me in the middle of the scum!// lord y everyone say that ur all good// why have u built shuch fings a hood// if i was u i would make everything all gud// if only i could//i reckon u should // lord u juss aint understood dis is the new centureeeeyy,not $$$$ing 1 million b.c// cant u see we have enemies!// r u blind to the fact that kids as youns as 11 r on crack// u must act u gotta make a inpact// absract the evil no more!we cant take the upheavil//

24-11-2002, 08:48 PM	#6
geenius Registered User Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 189	yer yer we hear bout peoples lifes all perrty and golri// no we never get the other side of the story// wot bout homeless children depressed bout every min of the day// they minds spining out control moving astray//limited 1 option dats to pray// pray dat an anominus stranger will take dem away for a new start// feel like a new born baby new heart broke apart from the past// the contrast of the past is not visable like a blind man// now able to see like sum1 got da key opend the door// door to a whole lot more// whole lot to explore whole lot to adore//

24-11-2002, 08:55 PM	#7
Exzes UKMusic.com Editorial Team Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 3,538	if life's all pretty and glory, you're living in the wrong place, so many fools $$$$ing $$$$ up, causing so much disgrace, we have to rebuild and replace, all the $$$$ that's been damaged, and all the souljahs getting shot up, to which we paid homage, every week another funeral, another homies getting locked in the pen, i'd give the lord, my sould to keep, if i never had to see this $$$$ again, it's hard just tryna survive in this suburban hell, makes you wanna roll up, inside your protective shell, but it just won't work, life still struggles by, make you sit and ponder, wondering why, if these are the consequences, why do people commit the crime, when 9 times out of 10, you have to pay your time, felony doesn't pay for the majority, only a few get away, but even they ain't outta the fire, they get fiended everyday

24-11-2002, 08:58 PM	#8
MC Makka Terror Unit Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 1,729	Bigup all 3 of ya - ur all good lyricistz

24-11-2002, 09:04 PM	#9
Exzes UKMusic.com Editorial Team Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 3,538	[Q]^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ see thats why you are the best lyricist on this forum. i have just proved my point. thank you for partispating. [/Q] oh wait, don't tell me this topic was meant to lure me in?

24-11-2002, 09:06 PM	#10
geenius Registered User Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 189	wot u on bout bruv

24-11-2002, 09:10 PM	#11
MC Makka Terror Unit Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 1,729	This is confusing

24-11-2002, 09:11 PM	#12
geenius Registered User Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 189	yer!!!!!

24-11-2002, 09:16 PM	#13
MC Makka Terror Unit Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 1,729	Exzes bruv plz explain - i am lost now

24-11-2002, 09:17 PM	#14
Exzes UKMusic.com Editorial Team Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 3,538	when i dropped my first chat, he mentioned about his point being proved and thanked me for participating, which made me think that he WANTED me to reply

24-11-2002, 09:17 PM	#15
MC Makka Terror Unit Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 1,729	I fort this thread was bout fidel castro being one of the best !!!!

24-11-2002, 09:18 PM	#16
MC Makka Terror Unit Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 1,729	That is wot i was finking

24-11-2002, 09:20 PM	#17
geenius Registered User Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 189	YER!!!?!!!?!!!!!!?!!?!?!?!?!!!!!!?!??!!?!!?!!!!!?! ?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!!!!!

24-11-2002, 09:21 PM	#18
geenius Registered User Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 189	ITS BOUT ME BEING THE BEST,TUT HE PUT THE WRONG TITLE SILLY HIM

24-11-2002, 09:22 PM	#19
Exzes UKMusic.com Editorial Team Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 3,538	yeah, but check what he wrote in response to my chat. it looks as though he put that title to entice me in, dispute him, and then prove his point about him thinking' i'm the best on the forum

24-11-2002, 09:24 PM	#20
Vagina Walls Im only a Silver member? Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 633	nooo wot happened fidel wid the big ego thought he was da best, den exzes pissed all over his chat, den he faked out he was doin a lil exsperiment, to prove dat exzes was da best....

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