this is a strange question mainly (lyrics also but its the question that matters)

[FreakyP]

ok i know most of you lot are southerners and into your grime and that......but basically tonight ive written a song...but wierdly.....its rap-rock.....i know it is i heard it all in my head but it was wierd

i was at my friends house tonight till about 10ish then when i got home it felt as though i was forced to open notepad on my pc........then i heard a beat guitars and the start of vocals in my head the thing is the song wouldnt move on untill id written the line that id heard....itd just repeat in my head

i knew but didnt know wht i was writing its really hard to explain but it was almost like someone/something had taken my mind to write this.

this is what i got

(spoken)
yea, its times like these,
that i, think about all my problems,
think about, all the hate
the sadness, and generally how i wanna fix it
so i, i just wanna tell you bout it
tell you a story,
a story bout a little guy
that nobody really knows
but everyone knows someone like him

(Verse 1)
theres this one little guy that got no credentials
and because of that no-one will see his true potential
see hes a genious with quick math and lots of knowledge
but he wonders through town just tryin to be acknowledged
he acts the fool, playin stupid-actin cool
to his few friends that he met way back in school
but hes older now and his life is fallin apart
and his girl just left now he has a broken heart,
now he spends his days playin games and trying to ignore
the feelings and the love that he felt before
hes hit the bottle drinkin his way to an early death
hopin that the next will be his last breath
but its not his time hes still so young
he wonders out some nights to where his father hung
he rests his head on his fathers tombstone
wishin that that day he never left home
without sayin goodbye or see you another time
he just left n put his neck on the line
said goodbye son i love you and ill see you soon
he dropped his note then he jumped to his doom

(Chorus)
life, yeh its hard for some
look at us all thinkin were someone
we ignore the pain and feelings of others
teenagers livin without fathers or mothers
theres people diein people cryin
theyve all given up there done tryin
these problems span all over the earth
coz people only care about there own worth
i said life, yeh its hard for some
look at us all thinkin were someone
we ignore the pain and feelings of others
teenagers livin without fathers or mothers
theres people diein people cryin
theyve all given up there done tryin
these problems span all over the earth
coz people only care about there own worth

(Verse 2)
our time on this earth is oh so very short
n suicide should be just your last resort
but forget about that lets go back to our guy
hes just got a job now and hes feelin fly
minimum wage full time work
but still goes home tired and hurt
hes stressed and feelin like he
doesnt fit in with the work family
hes out the loop, and knows no-one
he just does as hes told and gets it done
when he goes home his mum asks hows your day been
he just walks of sayin it aint as it seems
spends his wages on more booze
vodka or whiskey what does he chose
he looks in the mirror n sees his missing parent
but hes drunk and not very coherant
it wasnt his dad just his own reflection
but the way hes goin hes headed in the same direction
he notices this and throws the bottle to the ground
his mum worries but he doesnt make a sound

(chorus)
life, yeh its hard for some
look at us all thinkin were someone
we ignore the pain and feelings of others
teenagers livin without fathers or mothers
theres people diein people cryin
theyve all given up there done tryin
these problems span all over the earth
coz people only care about there own worth
i said life, yeh its hard for some
look at us all thinkin were someone
we ignore the pain and feelings of others
teenagers livin without fathers or mothers
theres people diein people cryin
theyve all given up there done tryin
these problems span all over the earth
coz people only care about there own worth

(guitar solo)

(Verse 3)
he looks at the broken bottle and thinks clearer than he ever has
hes not goin to waste his life just like his dads
he goes in his draw and finds a kodak
its him and his family before his fathers cold act
he was young and they were happy in that pic
but he only remembers how his father made him sick
he went down to the kitchen to find his mum
gives her a hug and tells her whats goin on
they both shed a tear for there fallen loved one
then they talk about what needs to be done
to turn his life around give him back that smile
he promises to leave the drink alone for a while
decides to be himself at his nine to five
show his co workers he is alive
he forces himself to talk to them
act interested so they'll talk again
he starts to enjoy himself and that smile slowly grows
hes turned his life around and everybody knows
they can see the change and the difference
this young guy has finally found his existance

(drum solo)
(chorus)
life, yeh its hard for some
look at us all thinkin were someone
we ignore the pain and feelings of others
teenagers livin without fathers or mothers
theres people diein people cryin
theyve all given up there done tryin
these problems span all over the earth
coz people only care about there own worth
i said life, yeh its hard for some
look at us all thinkin were someone
we ignore the pain and feelings of others
teenagers livin without fathers or mothers
theres people diein people cryin
theyve all given up there done tryin
these problems span all over the earth
coz people only care about there own worth


im just wondering if anyone else has ever experienced anything like this before....im in no way religeous into spirits or anything im just your average person thats not got any wierd connections with anythin. but these lyrics although ive typed them have not come from me and i cannot explain them

but to not only hear the lyrics but the music behind it aswell was the wierdest thing

call me alier or a fake if u wish i know what i experience n its the wierdest thing iv ever felt and i hope i never have to go through it again

also some might notice that the chorus is similar to another thing i wrote if u check my previous posts....i added that myself as i felt it was missing something andthought it just fit

[Cruel-T]

You're not a "fake"; you're not faking anything. Only you can tell where you've been or what you've been through. If you felt you had spiritual guidance, say so.\

I like the lyrics and if you lived in the US, I could hook that $$$$ up.
too bad, however.


good job.