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“	Originally Posted By: Illmind The Pit && The Pendulum.. ... "Impia Tortorum Longos Hic Turba Furores Sanguinis Innocui, Non Satiata, Aluit... Sospite Nunc Patria, Fracto Nunc Funeris Antro, Mors Ubi Dira Fuit Vita Salusque Patent..." [ Here The Wicked Crowd Of Tormentors, Unsated, Fed Their Long Time Lusts For Innocent Blood. Now That Our Homeland Is Safe, Now That The Tomb Is Broken, Life And Health Appear Where Once Was Dread Death... ] ... i was sick -- sick unto death with that long agony... Binded By Iron Chains 'N Shankles.. My Strained Ankles Put To Rest As I Sat Down.. My Lips Pursin` Into My Possible Last Frown.. As My History Rotted.. My Past Brown.. In An Array Of Dismay And Indifference.. There Was The Hindrance Of Complications.. Facing A Fiery Inferno On Earth.. A Noose Of Flames Cuttin` Off All Of My Respiration.. Thought Process Center Somewhat Paralyzed With An Anesthetic-Like Immobilization.. Breeze Escapes From My Lungs.. Grasped By The Hands Of A Fate Dealt From Satan.. 'N Suddenly .. The Neck Bones Supporting My Head Waved A White Flag To Curiosity.. Eyes Engaging War On The Robed Judges.. They Blinked Once 'N I Felt A Loss In Me.. Reincarnated.. Beings Of Hatred 'N Minions Of The Lake Of Fire.. Fulfillin` Their Deeds.. The Sacred Dominion Of My Emotions Resolved To Be Sliced In Portions As I`d Bleed.. A Powerful Voice Assaulted The Air.. I Choked Helplessly, Took A Venomnous Breath.. As The Final Verdict Was Read.. I, An Innocent Man .. Would Be Sentenced To Death.. The Judges Utterly Vanished.. But W/ Eyes Demonic.. Glared At Me With A Dim Stare.. Their Sin Bared.. Thru Their Pupils.. I Saw The Court Room Simply Vanish Into Thin Air.. ... even in the grave all is not lost. Else there is no immortality for man... In A Stupor.. Regainin` Consciousness Slowly.. Philosophies Awakened.. Open Minded.. Dark.. Was I Blinded..? Felt Fine, But My Thoughts Of Freedom Was Choked 'N Binded.. Apparently I Wasn`t Bruised Or Stretched.. And I Didn`t Even Percept A Sound Of Death.. Felt Cracks On The Earth.. The Ground Was Wrecked.. But No Noose Around My Neck? Confusion Upon The Dark Chamber That Was My Brain.. In The Most Abstract Of States.. Attacked By Fate.. Cruel Sister Of Torment.. Askin` To The Absence Of My Act Of Faith.. Felt I Had Nabbed My Mental 'N Spiritual Stage.. But Sanity Was Far From The Distance.. Barred From A Riddance Of A Lucid Idea Of The Whereabouts Of My Physical Existence.. Growin` Weary Of Talkin` Nonsense My Pulse Raging.. Heart Was Shocked 'N Throbbin`.. Came To A Conclusion That I Was Either Alive 'N Semi-Conscious Or Locked In A Coffin.. Devil On My Left Whisperin` [Give In To Fate] .. Angel On The Right.. Givin` Me Lectures.. Pensaments Of Seemingly Nothingness .. I Was Bound Down By Nonexistent Spectres.. At An Instance I Was Bewildered By Thoughts.. And Terror Struck By What The Truth Is.. Survival Was Useless.. Fate Was Ruthless.. Betrayed By Life Such As Caesar To Brutus.. No.. This Wouldn`t Be A Waste Of My Birth.. Cold Bodied, Savorin` The Taste Of The Dirt.. This Was It.. I Got Up Slowly .. And Broke Straight Through The Choke Hold Of The Earth.. ... My worst thoughts were confirmed. The blackness of eternal night encompassed me.. Lost In A Renewed Basis Of Life.. Decided To Walk A Few Paces To Examine The Area.. Stone Floors.. No Doors.. Walkin` Back 'N Forth.. No Light Source.. Led Up To Hysteria.. Fearful Ideas Seizing My Calmness.. All Of The Blood In My Heart.. Pumping In Torrents.. Relapsing Back Into A Frightened State.. Intelligence Leaving.. Brain Jumping In Torment.. Unsure Once Again.. Almost Naturally .. I Started To Flail My Arms 'N Legs In The Room.. Inept Towards Recovery.. Was Deeply Scarred.. Uncertain If I Was Encaged In My Tomb.. My Pores Opened.. The Gore`s Spoken Of.. Within My Doubtful Relapse That I`d Dread.. Perspirating.. W/ Sweat Drops The Size Of Quarters Burstin` From Pores In My Forehead.. After Endless Examination 'N Countless Theories.. Brought Forth My Thoughts Remnants.. That I Was Indeed In A Dungeon In Toledo.. Empty 'N Vacant.. As My Physical Presence.. I`d Further Examine This Confinement.. Clearly Not Knowing The Dimensions Of The Cell.. Morbid Feelings Surging Thru My Veins.. De Ja Vu In The Form Of An Acension Into Hell.. Walking Around.. Had No Other Purpose, Fatigue 'N The Sudden Feelin` Of Banishing Sin.. But My Inanition Led To A Painful Collision W/ The Ground.. 'N The Room Vanished Again.. ... The figures of fiends in aspects of menace, with skeleton forms, and other more really fearful images, overspread and disfigured the walls... My Eyes Opened.. Room Now Infested With Rats.. 'N I Would Have Gotten Up If I Could.. Until I Noticed That I Was Bounded Down By A Surcingle Tied Around A Board Of Wood.. Compressed 'N Binded.. Was Stressed 'N Blinded.. My Head 'N Left Arm Open 'N Freed.. To Consume Pungently Seasoned Meat.. But I Was Thirsty.. Now Outspoken W/ Greed.. Paralyzed.. I Was Looking Upward At The Ceiling.. Surveying The Side Walls 'N Panels.. 'N Suddenly I Layed Eyes On An Image That Stole My Curiosity.. Attention Mishandled.. Then I Stared Attentitavely @ The Figure.. Tongue Tied.. Capitvating My Mind 'N Health.. A Portrayal Of A Past Left 'N A Right Future 'N It Was Fascinating.. It Was Time Itsself.. Saw Him Come Closer To Me.. Maybe He Would Help Me.. I Thought I Befriended Him.. Approaching Me Little By Little .. Odor Of Sharp Steel .. He Was Wielding A Pendulum.. Mistaken 'N Awakened From This Travesty.. It Was A Fantasy Of Mine Darkened Mind.. Father Time Was On The Brink Of Taking My Life.. W/ What Was A Sharpened Scythe.. Horror Struck I Deplored My Luck On The Instant.. I`d Perish, But After I Saw The Hope.. Placed Meat Around The Material That Binded Me.. 'N The Rats Gnawed At The Ropes.. Unmovingly I Felt My Eyes Dry Up To God's Mercy.. But Gaspin` I Let Out A Holy Blink.. I Survived Time 'N Surmised My Life To Continue.. 'Till I Saw The Chamber Slowly Shrink.. ... I had but escaped death in one form of agony, to be delivered unto worse than death in some other... My Face Was Wrecked.. Upset With Stress.. I Screamed Out.. Just A Waste Of Breath.. The Walls Of The Dungeon Would Toss Me Into A Bottomless Pit .. 'N A Taste Of Death.. The Room Heated To Temperatures That Would Change Mercurys Subatomic Properties.. Was Unsure Of The Celestial Prophecies To Be Unveiled.. Was Philosophic As Socrates.. Stated My Apologies To The Lord For Laughing Death In The Face.. Resistance To Fate.. For A Second I Thought Time Stopped .. Horrified To Destiny, My Existence Would Wait.. But The Walls Stopped.. 'N I Heard Human Voices 'N Royal Trumpets Blaring In My Head.. SAVED.. Saved @ Last.. [ But What He Didn`t Know Was That He Was Actually DEAD.. ] Feedback?	”

“	Originally Posted By: Exzes Just one note. If you're going to write a whole song, then audio, not text is the way forward. I got to the chorus and couldn't be bothered to read anymore. Not because it wasn't good, I liked it, but simply because it's long to read all of that when it could easily be put into a 3 minute audio clip instead. 5 verses...reh. But good style still, could do with shortening the bars as it would be hard to condense it into a beat.	”

“	I do audio aswell,,,text however stresses more on lyrics which i prefer	”

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