Taking You Out

DustySkidz

This is my new joint. Check it out, and tell me what you think.

Shame on you now I'm running up on you,
Your s'hit is banned I think you need a hand,
To understand, that I got this all planned,
My rhymes are so hot that they'll get you tanned

You won't beat me, I accept no losses,
I got what it takes to be the boss of all bosses,
My tactics are strong arm, when I strike I do harm,
I like to be rowdy, I don't like the calm

I get the fly girlies cos I got the charm,
Don't introduce me to you woman cos I can guarantee,
That at the end of the night she's coming home with me,
You paid to get her drunk and then I F'uck her for free

Look inside the dictionary and I think you'll find,
Dusty Skidz pictured there right alongside rhyme,
I've been waiting for this moment for a long long time,
If you think you see a sucker then you done gone blind

“	Hook And I'll be speeding through whether you like it or not, You's just a straight Fa'ggot but you're claiming Hip-Hop, Where's the proof that you know how to party and flow, Playa hater I'll beat you down when you come to my show I'll probably be the reason why your career is dead, It's kinda like I put two bullets in the side of it's head, Heard what I said? Now if you wanna run out ya mouth, I'm gonna treat you like the trash and I'll be taking you out	”

I'm stepping up my game on the second verse,
Gonna kick it first time and I won't rehearse,
And the worst you could do is the worse I expected,
Weak s'hit like that ain't gonna get you respected

And this s'hit is hectic, actually nah, f'uck that, it's crazy,
Esta Loca, chupe mi la baby,
If you don't understand espanól that means suck my d'ick,
I've got some underhand tactics that gon' make you sick

Like pulling you out your car and hittin you with a brick.
All I want is 5 minutes all alone with you,
Beating motherf'uckers down is what I got to do,
I speak mad logic but it's lost on you

I ain't gonna let you come up in the game or my skills diminish,
This s'hit just started but soon it will be finished,
I'm gonna make you understand just what a f'ucking win is,
When I drap'e my flag across your face, celebrate first place at the finish

“	Hook And I'll be speeding through whether you like it or not, You's just a straight Fa'ggot but you're claiming Hip-Hop, Where's the proof that you know how to party and flow, Playa hater I'll beat you down when you come to my show I'll probably be the reason why your career is dead, It's kinda like I put two bullets in the side of it's head, Heard what I said? Now if you wanna run out ya mouth, I'll treat you like the trash and I'll be taking you out	”

Number 1 with a bullet, number 1 in my streets,
Rule number 1 is the rule that says you be facing defeat,
On the run is how you'll be, on the run from Dusty,
Reminds me of a Jungle Brothers joint I heard in my infancy

You know I got the master flow, fast or slow,
You wanna know who the best is, go ask your ho,
I'll be the rapper who will pop the King and scoop the Queen,
I'll take over the streets with a ruthless team

Like Jadakiss said, kiss the game goodbye,
I'll have you wandering through the streets with a swollen eye,
And a baseball bat sticking out you colon,
I hope you crash into a tree as if your name's Marc Bolan

So basically, you can't see me,
Put your hands in the air and give it up to me,
Realise motherf'ucker I'm gon' take you out,
So think carefully before you run out ya mouth

“	Hook And I'll be speeding through whether you like it or not, You's just a straight Fa'ggot but you're claiming Hip-Hop, Where's the proof that you know how to party and flow, Playa hater I'll beat you down when you come to my show I'll probably be the reason why your career is dead, It's kinda like I put two bullets in the side of it's head, Heard what I said? Now if you wanna run out ya mouth, I'll treat you like the trash and I'll be taking you out	”

Tazer

not bad...flow seemed a lil bit shaky but overall fairly good

DustySkidz

Cheers man, appreciated. I was just trying some different rhyming styles on this tune. When I spit it it sounds wicked

DustySkidz

Anymore feedback?

Exzes

Too much rap, not enough Hip-Hop.