T2: Hoodzy VS Dagsz

[K1NG]

Spitfire
Each individual clash will short and quick
2 verses (8lines approx)


All emcees that participate will be asked to vote. If they DO NOT vote, they will be disqualified. After both emcees have dropped both theirs verses. All participating emcees will have 24hrs to give a structured vote.
Details of voting will be specified later on

Each clash will be voted on;
*Punches (personal attacks on the emcee)
*Flow (how well the words go together the basically how smooth it sounds)
*Creativity (how different and how creative you verse is e.g. not rapping about the same thing over and over again)
*World play (metaphors smart use of words etc, e.g. these don’t want beef their vegetarians
*Humour (I don't need to explain this one)
But normally you can tell who is better any way.

This clash is now open for both emcees to drop there verses

[Hoodzy]

Pen on a paper, like a dagger in my hand,
Lethal, Rip your skin Strand to Strand,
I'll stretch it across my African drum Base,
Use you as the beat, remain in good Pace,
And as things age, your skin will become faded,
Your like a T-Mobile phone, Easily Upgraded,
Take you apart, like a chip from the phone,
Your biodegradable, easily broken down.

Sorry about the edit, pressed Send by accident early

[dagsz]

i havin been waitin for this rap and now it seams like 4 ages clik and i saw,
u and laugh because i no i would murder u, and i havent took on a bird befor,
i wud love to battle lil wayne so i guse ur my closest to marshin could there be any more,
as i spit my barz im the king and your the bling round my neck i can drop u easy on da floor,
i thought you were a boy sorry but y u put male god no's but ur a bird but your sayin $$$$ bout ma mum?,
its like ur a boy coming back sayin $$$$ bout doin her up the bum, and how you enjoy it yum yum?,
but girl shut the fu3k up cos i would floor you then i would CUM, al over ur face after i stunded u,
ur on the floor on all 4's as i dart my roket up ur moon i leave you on the floor ur moon iz stick like glue,

[Hoodzy]

i'll make your process short from cradle to death,
your eyes playing tricks, like your taking Meth,
too much, now i've got you choking,
On a bee farm, your not a king, your the queen i'm smoking,
Too much energy in my words, my blood is red bull,
Btch your too poor, make a jumper from your mums pubic wool,
i must be Gravity, keeping you on the lowest level,
If your mum loves you she's sipping poison, your the son of a devil.

Computer is $$$$ed up along with Phone sorry

[dagsz]

talkin but my mum sippin me like poision as im the devlis son?,
but least mum could get a son and urs dont so she tell you to dress like one,
but listen im not done with you might as well as you cant reach my level,
im now stepin up the lader reachin the top always goin forwards dont back pedle,
dont go back on your self you gotta get better if you wanna win this tourement,
bend your ur words really good just like ur bk ur gutta go to the full extent,
i slaughterd u in 16 barz al together, give up this game and take up lent,
or if ur gunna stay with this u better step up ur game u int had a good bar recent,

[dagsz]

thats it int it ? 2 verses each int it hoodzy ?

[Hoodzy]

Think so, Good Game,

[dagsz]

yeah that was a close game

[kd0t]

Will vote on this later when I'm not using a phone, surprised me how close it was no idea how ill vote yet!

[Bane]

• Punches - Dagsz
• Flow - Hoodzy
• Creativity - Hoodzy
• Word play - Hoodzy
• Humour - Only one line made me laugh which was Dagsz "but least my mum could get a son and urs dont, so she tell you to dress like one"

Vote - Hoodzy

[kd0t]

For me

• Punches
  
  First Round: Hoodzy, even though I docked points for the last rhyme as it didn't, slight oversight there i think.
  
  

  Your like a T-Mobile phone, Easily Upgraded,
  Take you apart, like a chip from the phone,
  Your biodegradable, easily broken down.

  
  Second Round: No notable punches for me from either.
  
  Winner: Hoodzy
  
  
• Flow
  
  For me this could only go to Hoodzy. Could not pick up the flow to Daggz at all.
  
  Winner: Hoodzy
  
• Creativity
  
  Nothing notable for me.
  
• Word play
  
  Nothing quotable for me.
  
• Humour
  
  Nothing quotable for me.
  

I thought this owuld come out closer in the breakdown because for daggz i reckon this is the best I've seen of him but Hoodzy has more experience and her style is more refined so I vote for her.

daggz keep it though.

[Hoodzy]

Thanks for feedback (Y)

[N104life]

Illl Vote Later..

[LJT]

Punches - Dagsz
Flow - Hoodzy
Creativity - Hoodzy
Word Play - Neither
Humour - Dagsz

Overall im gonna have to give my vote to Hoodzy. I felt Dagzs focused too much on feedin off what Hoodzy had wrote n lost some creativity in his bars. As said, wasn't much humour apart from Dagsz 1 line, but also Dagsz was alot better then in the past. Keep chippin away!

[K1NG]

Punches - Dagsz
Flow - Hoodzy
Creativity - Hoodzy
Word Play - Tie
Humour - Tie

Vote: Hoodzy