Stay Outta My Face Kid

DustySkidz

Stay In Time When I Rhyme,
Bust A Bar, I Get Free,
I'll School Ya Whole Team Not To $$$$ Wit Me,
I Wanna Let You Know That Your Stuck Wit Me,
I Got The Skills Of A Vet, But I'm Only 23
I Come To Your Area And Cause Mass Hysteria,
Don't Wanna Look At Me The Wrong Way,
Cos' Then I'd Have To Bury Ya,
Like A Pit Bull Terrier,
Or A Bomb Threat I'm Scarin' Ya,
You Say You Got A Wife And Kids,
Do You Really Think I'm Carin',
Huh?
Dusty Skidz, So Fresh And Keeps $$$$ Dark,
You Heard About My Bite,
Now I'm Bout To Bark
It's A Full Moon,
I'm A Bark All Night,
I'm A Bark In The Dark 'til The Early Light
My Bass Gone Burst,
Leave You Disorientated,
And If You Wanna Talk $$$$ I'll Put You In Your $$$$ing Place Kid,
I'll Burn Your $$$$ing Eyes Like A Can Of Mace Did,
And If You Don't Wanna Get Dropped,
Then Stay Outta My Face Kid

lady_lyrical_00

“	It's A Full Moon, I'm A Bark All Night, I'm A Bark In The Dark 'til The Early Light	”

...... a hint of dmx,,, (not sayin u taxed him jus sayin it osunds like sumtin he wud say lolz)

....dis piece was not bad but.... like i go b4 ,, try havvin equal lengthed lines and also try usin a mor different word schemez n rhyme schemez


structure n dat has big effect on the way ppl interpret ur wrk n also the way they interpret ur flow

try havvin a unique topik,,,,, makes u stand out n try stff like worldy issues/problems/life/past tymz/ambitionz

...... bein a muslim myself.... n bein a $$$$stani i wud write sumtin unique like racism towards islam or bein treeated unfairly at sumpointz, c wer im cumin frm

overall keep elevatin n ull b droppin fire

lady_lyrical_00

lissen, ill chek the rest of ur flows inna bit coz im in coll right now, gotta go

tc yer

DustySkidz

Yeah, that bit does sound like DMX. I thought that myself when i wrote it, but i thought "$$$$ it, I'll leave it in"