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    Safe whats going on, just something I wrote a while ago



    Back in 04 my Pops got locked up
    Sentenced to 8, only did 4, not much
    Cause see im talkin months not years
    But when it started it was always my fear
    To see my father in penetentiary
    You see it on TV all the time, but not in a century
    Would you ever think you'd see it happen to yourself
    Not a hand you'd think you'd see yourself dealt
    Those ringing words just make your brain melt
    "Your dad's gone to prison" just cant describe how i felt
    The only reason I kept upright, on my feet
    Are those true-to-the heart brothers, dudes so elite
    Stayed with me when I needed it most
    When I needed my space they made like a ghost
    You can find the best actors in Hollywood they say
    The best homies you find is where i'm living today

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    yo barz are sic blud keep on goin

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    i wrote this a few days ago any good ? u like ?
    im puttin this on a track with my mate



    i was born for rap,
    made to attack,
    these kind of barz i never lack,
    give me a mic and i'll show you up on a track,
    my barz are cold and gettin colder,
    you wana copy my lyrics and store in ur folder,
    i dont spit lame barz no more i spit much older,
    cos im a heavy weight,
    clashin a light feather weight,
    in this rap game you'r crap your a fake,
    out of me and u its only gunna be me who make,
    it being me a rapper and anything i want in life,
    im gunna do well im gunna have a nice house and wife,
    start to dis me i'll hunt u down reach for the gun then snipe,
    i murk every singal one of ur lines,
    listen to me i have indervidual rymes,
    i attack you with every line,
    i come in out of a song attackin you at a differnt time,
    think ur a hard man runnin round the streets doin crime?,
    i slaughter you if step to me, i will stab u then wipe you up,
    reach for my gun and snipe you up,
    you cant even spit a bar, i just laugth it up,
    i dont even think of my lines, i just make them up,
    role you in a spliff and just light you up,
    mc's come battling me in there numberz and masses,
    i spit fire and flames in all my battles and clashes,
    U aint never held anything bigger,
    Then a water pistol with a plastic trigger,
    you have load of barz that dont ryme,
    mine do they ryme every single time,
    with my writin punches,
    and then i move to a differnt attck with my lunhes,
    i attck u fast with everything i spit,
    so u want me? i'll give u alittle bit,
    to slowly well on when ur tappin out sayin i submit,
    cos i just murked you with line, cos im so quick,
    im the new number one watch out fam cos im so slick,
    ive won, you no, u have just gotta admit,
    that i can murk you everyday,
    do u no why cos this is what i say,
    i'll murk you with every line,
    up and down just to get to ur spine,
    this rap game is dagz its all mine,
    cos im dagz,
    and my barz hurt like 20 stabz,
    straight into ur heart,
    as i keep on goin im rippin u apart,
    me and b-dup together we smart,
    nothing or anyone can tear us apart,
    im at the top of the rap bar chart,
    im not big headed im big hearted,
    i belive in my self im no loser,
    when it comes to girls mate im not user,
    when im spitin my barz fam im da cruser,
    any race i enter i come out winin,
    all ur barz i end up binin,
    im like ronaldo in this rap cos im skinin,
    any one who step to me,
    im the best here mate come on u hav to agree,
    or if not i'll leave u with a 3rd arm degree,
    u no y cos cold hearted gee,
    if u dont agree i'll make u get down on one knee,
    and make u say that i am,
    cos im dagz,
    im no player runnin after slags,
    or even wankin of some porn magz,
    i never go out in horsties like u $$$z,
    u think ur good at mc just cos u do $$$$y tagz,
    but im just gunnta spit this one of my chest,
    im just to good for rap bar-chart im the best,
    in this rap game cos im god's blessed,
    im defo not gunna a fail a singal test,
    like the other mc's tryin to b rapper im not gunna rest,
    im gunna keep goin till i get this of ma chest,
    $$$$ chipmunk his not god's blessed,
    im not gunna be un known im gunna be herd of,
    im gunna leave this chart im just above,
    of anyone eles they or u dont stand a chance,
    aganst code2 cos we to in advance,

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    Quote Originally Posted by dagsz
    i wrote this a few days ago any good ? u like ?
    im puttin this on a track with my mate



    i was born for rap,
    made to attack,
    these kind of barz i never lack,
    give me a mic and i'll show you up on a track,
    my barz are cold and gettin colder,
    you wana copy my lyrics and store in ur folder,
    i dont spit lame barz no more i spit much older,
    cos im a heavy weight,
    clashin a light feather weight,
    in this rap game you'r crap your a fake,
    out of me and u its only gunna be me who make,
    it being me a rapper and anything i want in life,
    im gunna do well im gunna have a nice house and wife,
    start to dis me i'll hunt u down reach for the gun then snipe,
    i murk every singal one of ur lines,
    listen to me i have indervidual rymes,
    i attack you with every line,
    i come in out of a song attackin you at a differnt time,
    think ur a hard man runnin round the streets doin crime?,
    i slaughter you if step to me, i will stab u then wipe you up,
    reach for my gun and snipe you up,
    you cant even spit a bar, i just laugth it up,
    i dont even think of my lines, i just make them up,
    role you in a spliff and just light you up,
    mc's come battling me in there numberz and masses,
    i spit fire and flames in all my battles and clashes,
    U aint never held anything bigger,
    Then a water pistol with a plastic trigger,
    you have load of barz that dont ryme,
    mine do they ryme every single time,
    with my writin punches,
    and then i move to a differnt attck with my lunhes,
    i attck u fast with everything i spit,
    so u want me? i'll give u alittle bit,
    to slowly well on when ur tappin out sayin i submit,
    cos i just murked you with line, cos im so quick,
    im the new number one watch out fam cos im so slick,
    ive won, you no, u have just gotta admit,
    that i can murk you everyday,
    do u no why cos this is what i say,
    i'll murk you with every line,
    up and down just to get to ur spine,
    this rap game is dagz its all mine,
    cos im dagz,
    and my barz hurt like 20 stabz,
    straight into ur heart,
    as i keep on goin im rippin u apart,
    me and b-dup together we smart,
    nothing or anyone can tear us apart,
    im at the top of the rap bar chart,
    im not big headed im big hearted,
    i belive in my self im no loser,
    when it comes to girls mate im not user,
    when im spitin my barz fam im da cruser,
    any race i enter i come out winin,
    all ur barz i end up binin,
    im like ronaldo in this rap cos im skinin,
    any one who step to me,
    im the best here mate come on u hav to agree,
    or if not i'll leave u with a 3rd arm degree,
    u no y cos cold hearted gee,
    if u dont agree i'll make u get down on one knee,
    and make u say that i am,
    cos im dagz,
    im no player runnin after slags,
    or even wankin of some porn magz,
    i never go out in horsties like u $$$z,
    u think ur good at mc just cos u do $$$$y tagz,
    but im just gunnta spit this one of my chest,
    im just to good for rap bar-chart im the best,
    in this rap game cos im god's blessed,
    im defo not gunna a fail a singal test,
    like the other mc's tryin to b rapper im not gunna rest,
    im gunna keep goin till i get this of ma chest,
    $$$$ chipmunk his not god's blessed,
    im not gunna be un known im gunna be herd of,
    im gunna leave this chart im just above,
    of anyone eles they or u dont stand a chance,
    aganst code2 cos we to in advance,
    You should put your name down for the tournament?

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    ilie n stop writin ALL OVAH THE THREAD N-I-G-G-AH YUR GUD

    at spittin sign up for tournermenT control n stop wating Yo A55 uP

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