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Realest/Deepest Lyrics! (No Battles, Jus Emotions to Paper to Blog)

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    I'll start with something basic...

    We had never touched.
    I figured what was the rush.
    I know that there was a crush,
    Like a lust between both of us.
    You had to be blind not to see.
    What your beauty was doing to be.
    I was struck to the highest degree,
    Now I'm burning up, there's no room to breathe.

    Like a vulture chasing an eagle,
    A shark that feeds on a seagull.
    I had no control of my feelings.
    Dead inside, why am I still breathing.
    I have no heart cos you took it.
    Tore it apart like a booklet.
    Shook it, crooked, now it's useless.
    Gave it back covered in bruises.

    It's hard to die when i'm living,
    Easy to faint when i'm breathing.
    Laughing, crying, mixed emotions.
    Life's a game and I'm outta tokens.


    THIS THREAD IS NOT TO SEE WHO'S BETTER THAN WHO, JUST WRITE SOMETHING THAT'S DEEP, WHETHER IT'S PRE-WRITTEN OR ON THE SPOT, IT DOESN'T MATTER!

    Good luck Can't wait to read them....

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    I keep my emotions locked within, heart cold, consumed by sin /
    Mind bold, yet struggling, to stay on the path, I'm wandering //
    Seen my aspirations, shot out of the night sky /
    Now confused, about what I want to remain, when I die //

    Determined to leave a mark, not a memory but a legacy /
    An example of what you can get out of life, if you attempt to be //
    More than a Gang Banger, or being on top of the game /
    Emo, Goth, be more than a group name //

    Be more than a human, I'm trying to elevate my position /
    Rise above the pain and strife, so I can envision //
    A healthy world, not infected by lies /
    A world, where only the truth can survive //

    Innocent man, I have a motive but no means /
    Opportunity is here but it's mostly unseen //
    So tell me, how can I change the world's health /
    When I can't, even change myself //

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    Since Kaine born, I been wrapped, in a coat of pitch black hatred/
    Personality split, thoughts twinned, innocence degraded//
    My minds overcast. just have too many shadowy thoughts/
    Got me contemplating suicide to leave behind a raggedy corpse//

    I'm a regular depressive ~ pessimist, it re-aligns my intelligence/
    Have this law abiding citizen, pre-meditating vengeance//
    Cos this elephantine cerebellum, embeds, all indiscretion's/
    Demands my attention. The buzzing's so incessant//

    I'll never have peace, so I resign myself to darkness residing/
    Cos silence, requires confrontation; maybe violence//
    Happiness is fleeting, this cycle keeps repeating/
    Trust is a magic trick, the sleight of hand's deceiving//

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    I can also write depressing biopics and essays
    About how life is a disarray like a Lamb led astray
    "FML": so overly-cliched
    Why delay to convey a display of dismay, and pray for a better day, staying but fading away, not being able to say it'll be "okay"?

    Snow. A compromising quid pro quo
    It sets faces aglow.
    Yet into a blizzard of chaos, the world is thrown

    Behold, a beautiful landscape at the price of the subzero cold
    And icy, unforgiving winds that frequently can go uncontrolled
    And indoor heating ventilation systems that just won't hold
    Then just a few weeks later, it becomes sludge and gets old

    A distraction from all your life's woes
    It makes schools close, an extra day it bestows
    A world lit with white from coast to coast
    A world so grandiose; all the media's attention it will engross
    Pristine enough to write placid poetry or polyphonic prose
    But don't you ever think it can be an overdose?
    Happiness, like snow, melts, and the hard ground is exposed
    Inevitably, our troubles that had arose start to reshow
    Thorns among a rose; purposefully superimposed
    Lost its sense of true magic; immeasurably juxtaposed
    Why do we just sit there and let life decompose
    Staring blindly at our reflection in the repose of river-flows
    Who knows where life goes, be it highs or lows
    Capricious gradients, suppose when it starts to transpose
    How it chose to compose the source of where your pain grows
    All of a sudden the beauty, the pleasure, is forced to go adios

    You stare out at the vast snow that has amassed
    You watch kids playing in it and remember times passed

    When you were like them, in the past when ignorant bliss was a blast
    When happiness couldn't be more unsurpassed
    When you didn't know the definition of the word pain and outcast
    When such things weren't such a harassing pain in the ass
    When you never wished that you were decomposing under the grass
    When no one told you would never be top of the class

    Deadlocked in a never-ending impasse
    Reality blossoms through the shattered glass
    Life is like a beautiful doll containing a canister of poison gas
    All the harassment endured en masse

    I stare out at the vast snow that has amassed
    And I long for the old times in the past that have passed
    Oh the ironic, temperamental contrast
    And how much it erodes and its speed; oh how fast
    And I wonder, at such speed, how long will this white happiness last?

    What can I say about the life with which you toyed?
    Seeing me in annoyed agony must make you overjoyed.
    All the games and superficiality you employed
    With all the hallucinatory drugs, depressants, steroids
    Will you apologise to the life that you destroyed?
    How can I live again when all I see above is void?

    As I trudge along the concrete streets tinged cobalt
    What happens when brine loses its salt?
    What is a distilling barley without its malt?
    Someone stole from a royal vault,
    Whose to blame for the fault?
    Due to interference, a life is cut short by accidental assault
    So I wonder: how would it feel if your life came to a halt?

    I think as I slowly stare up in bitter thought
    Fraught with distraught, but still inconspicuously overwrought
    You won't believe the hard lessons I was taught
    Nor will you the battles I've fought
    The anguish, the suicidal notions, all the lot
    Restraints that were taut, the freedom that I sought
    Were I attempted to visualize but have never ever caught
    They took advantage of all my weak spots
    And you just stood there, watching helplessly as my life rots
    My essence, emotion, existence you've even forgot

    How does it feel to have your heart battered and shattered
    And served to you like an entree course on a platter?
    What you know of me is a pathetic smatter
    I hate having a thousand "should've"'s splatter
    With all these superficial flatters and incessant vicious chatter
    But to you, it just doesn't seem to matter.

    Fine then, forget about me. Leave me out here to rust
    Let me lose the sense of hope, connection, lust, trust
    Let the physical form wear away and combust
    Let it become one with the Earth's dying crust
    Let it become the epitome of the opposite of robust
    Thrust a look upon it with unjust, undiscussed, unadjusted, disgust
    After all, what worth am I to you all if I'm lower than the dust?

    The thalassic, thin thorns the$$$$utically thought through thorough
    Toiled from the consequences of trouble that was borrowed
    Making brows that furrow, trying to push past these sorrows
    Because the best of your days are always the worst of your tomorrows

    Disappearing over the horizon are the remaining scraps of spiritual essence.
    The same way a senescent man living in a convalescence
    Dependent on anti-depressants is wary of the ancient quintessence of his adolescence
    An unconscious decision made with much acquiescence
    Memories fading into the ether of obsolescence
    Like an iridescent, evanescent bubble of effervescence.
    Now gazing at the phosphorescent fluorescence of the now-luminescent night-crescent
    He feels incessant bittersweet nostalgia brewing in his heart of incandescence
    And wishes he could savour again his last moment of rejuvenating essence.

    I don't think I can truly say I comprehend
    Feeling powerless, penniless, pacified, penned
    Now, as the darkest of all hours impends
    I wonder to myself: is this truly the end?

    So if you want a rhyme protesting against war, then you got that
    Innovative rhymeschemes instead of duking it out on Mortal Kombat
    Why waste lives with nines to make lines go flat
    When one can write rhymes more agile than an acrobat

    So I'mma tell you like Jay-Z told me:
    I was gonna kill a couple terrorists, but they did it to themselves
    I was gonna do it with the flow, but they did it with their sales
    I was gonna 9/11 'em, but they didn't need my help
    And they did a good job of it, so they must be talented as hell
    Cuz not only did they brick they put a building up as well
    They ran a plane into that building and when that building fell
    Innocent civilians rushed to the crash site with no masks and inhaled
    Toxins penetrating deep inside their lungs until both of them was filled and felled
    Blew a cloud out like a L into a jar then took a smell
    Cuz they heard that second hand smoking really kills
    Terrorists thought they was ill found out they was...ILL
    And it's like they knew exactly how I wanted you to feel
    What's the point of fighting with gore, and fighting till you're sore?
    What's the point of fighting if you don't even know what you're fighting for?
    What's the point of fighting if you don't even know why anymore?
    True, lasting victory comes through peace, not from war.

    Salute to all the veterans, but love is stronger than a nuclear weapon
    So let the missiles rain on worldwide parade
    Cause my love is a soldier, and my heart is a grenade
    The serenade of similar air raids
    Life gives me lemons, so I just make lemonade
    Come to the world's aid, make a change, make war dissuade
    Heal the world, it's worth saving, so don't let it fade into the shade
    Don't do it for the cascades of accolades
    Do it for the love and affection to be displayed for decades
    Invade, blockade, blade; all manmade
    Maybe that is why the world is always seemingly so afraid
    So don't let it die away, don't let the Haitians decay waiting for the fire brigade
    This is the message I have made to convey; don't degrade it off as being cliched
    A dream is a powerful thing; a single one can leave the world swayed

    Learn to brighten your day; learn how to genuinely smile,
    Versatile trials test you; so go the extra miles it takes to cross the bloody Nile
    Don't be vile and hostile; we all know that style is not worthwhile
    For friendship and happiness is a greater sword than nuclear missiles.

    Why can't people think not of themselves in a divinity?
    Maybe it's due to the fact they derogate affinity
    The pain is worse than a wound saturated in the neutralization of alkalinity by salinity
    Starting fights in incomparable vicinity doesn't broadcast your masculinity,
    No, it makes you seem more like the affinity of an Unholy trinity.
    Perceptions are more confusing than the theoretical concept of infinity.

    Why can't one give support like a lath?
    Why can't world peace and harmony ever cross paths?
    Why does discord have to provoke unnecessary wrath?
    Factors don't add up; there's no equation, so I'll do it in maths.

    Lives Lost (War+Terrorism)= Thousands of Lives
    Lives= Children x Men x Their Wives

    Forcing the youth to kill their own kind
    Giving them guns and corrupting their minds.

    Pressing red buttons, to fry them like mutton
    Needles in a needless war, thoughts all gone rotten

    Explosives + guns + tanks + nukes
    > Peaceful countries shunning it with rebuke

    Therefore, they are caught with nowhere to run
    Forced to fight a battle that will never be won

    Silenced rounds at the speed of subsonic jets
    Airstrikes = Very (realistic + great) threats

    (War+ terrorism) x 100fold
    Input (Innocent blood), Output (the price of pure gold)

    So try to heal the world by showing some kindness
    Saving the people; healing their desperate blindness

    Help the world, country by country, before WWIII befalls
    What's the matter? Got no heart, or got no balls?

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