Real Lyrical Prowess

DustySkidz

You're makin a mistake cos when you step to the plate,
You'd better state your purpose, yo, you'd better state your case,
I can tell by the look on your face that you can't take the pace,
You're in last place in the race cos you be making mistakes

That's just how it is when you can't handle your biz,
The game I play's X rated and I ain't playing with kids,
You're advised to stop your fakin or after laughter comes tears,
The situations escalating, I won't allieviate your fears

I'll abrieviate your years and I will shorten your odds,
I'm immortal to you suckers, motherf'uckers calling me god,
You're like Ken Dodd's Diddy Men, you're too small, your rhymes more sh'itty then,
A pile of manure for sure, fools like you, you know, I pity them

United we stand and divided we're hard,
cos that means that we'll surround you when we come to your yard
You need to play your hand but fate's decided your cards,
Bet you wish you'd done it different, take it back to the start

You shoiuld know where it's at and you should know that sh'it happens,
I'll pin you to the mat and I won't stop til you're tappin,
You need to stop your dreaming, i think u won't make it rapping,
I'm gonna call you Rip Van Winkle cos you're constantly napping

Man, I'm flowing right now. F'uck battling. Like it says on the tin, this is real lyrical prowess.

Tazer

That flowed nice man

I-RoNiK

With tazer on that one, lovin your flow!
Here's somethin I wrote not that long ago.... (that was not intentionally meant to rhyme btw lol)

nail biting as my fate hangs in the balance
a smart kid, but dont wanna be judged on my talents
waiting. tears are running its too painful i cant take it
wish you'd just tell me if i'm good enough to make it.
i guess thats why they say that patience is a virtue
id treat u like a king, neva do nuffin to hurt you
Id do anythin to make you the happiest person alive,
i just wanted to help you, help you soar thru the sky
I know ur down, and life aint treatin u well
but me n u could make sumfin, insted of living this hell
wish i could read your mind an know the right things to say
wouldnt let anyfin or anybody get in our way

but its too late, everyfin has been said an done,
its turned cold now, after we've both had our fun
you went back home, to try n fix up ur family
while im still down here tryin to regain my sanity
feelin foolish but cant let pride get me down
just gotta accept i lost, and let you take the crown.
n everyfin that i once loved has now turned to hate
theres no more ifs and buts, theres nuffin left to debate
I still miss you and when i reminicse it makes me sad
i cant beleive you let go all those things that we had.
n u said u loved me, but were u just saying the words?
id like to fink it's true... everyfin that i heard.
I guess I'll never truly know just what you were feeling
but it's time to move on now so we can both start the healing.

Sorry for my poor english.. but that was pretty raw $$$$ n it just came out how it was!