poetic

silence

yeh, just showin my style n hopin to get feedback or maybe inspire some similar stuff.

ps if ur tryin to picture how it sounds when spat, think of asher d in the clash against dizzee to get an idea of the rhythm/flow

you're proviking all these visions of phonecian sailors drowning,
it's astounding that i'm frowning hearing 'death by water' sounding
type mimesis, just believe this; be you gentile or jew
it is you who turns the wheel looking to windwards not your crew,
they're in the whirlpool swimming circles and they're running out of breath
while holding purple kinda lilics in their hands thinking of death,
oh how it's april, see this fake sand from the wasteland next to margate,
watch the plants' fate as they can't take paths of life that lead to heart ache

i may be water on a lake and make a sort of awkward flow
you thought you'd know the way my ripples run right through the sun and snow
but undertones right under stones disturb the volts that thunder throws
upon the surface in the cold whilst sending jolts that run the show
'select your mic/electrotyte' and pay attention please, now follow this
solution full of lyrics in this natural electrolysis
the chemicals are stopping all the molecules from moving
and with lyrics i'll be proving i'm an oracle of new things...


cf The Wasteland - Eliot (1922)