Plz look at this...im sad:(

SuperSonic

Ok a lot of people say mc's chat $$$$ so......
I wana see how u react 2 this...
(before u ask..yes..im a $$$$ed up brere since a couple dayz ago)

yea ur da gal da gal dat i need,
but truss it juss dun mata wot i see,
coz u explained dat u aint goin out wif me,
so i guess im a mc bak 2 be,
im a lonely man til u come bak,
so i sit and rite dis meanful chat,
i let out da feelins dem dat i feel,
but time, ma time it aint ma heel,
coz deep deep down ya no i no,
dat i neva eva wanted ma gal 2 go,
ur worth every second of da time i wait,
dis is so real i rely on fate,

but how long is it im guna be waitin,
listen 2 da meanin of da words dat im statin,
due 2 dem vibes dat we were creatin,
i used 2 fone u hessitatin,
and every time i hear a nockin on ma door,
but its neva da gal dat im waitin for,
i get upset and $$$$ up ma head,
den i cry for a lil den i sink 2 bed,
wake up da next day and i feel da same,
ja rule sed pains love well loves bout pain.....

dis is love a painful game,
u wore ma heart and u left a stain,
i dun no u well and i aint nown u long,
but if u wana be dere den dats where u belong,
meant more 2 me den any other lady,
on ma mind all da time and made me go crazy,
most manz would say dat its juss too late,
but i dun care any more coz im stil guna wait.....


So wot u fink?
Dat started off as a sweet ickle poem...den i added a bit of slang and a few words ere and there so it would fit in wif a garage tempo....

KRYSIZ MC

Is alrite blad.

Sen

I'd most definitely rather hear this than all that gun $$$$e / avirex $$$$e / bling bling $$$$e that I hear nowadays.

Your lyrics have heart and soul in them...that's rare in UKG - big it!

Blakey

thats nice. keep writing $$$$ like that bro.

mc vortex

Biggup blud - agreed wiv sen!!

lady_*ice

Yay!!!

That is lovely.... any girl with a heart would appriciate that... and like Sen says - if u were using it as a chat... it has heart and osul... something thats lacking at the moment!

Jason 13th

IM FILLIN UP..

dj switch(matt)

Thats deep. I like that. Better than all this hater / violence $$$$ that we get these days.

*Lady_Krispi*

Well done! I hate all those rhymes that just biggup the MC or hate on people.

Trilogy

Yea nice one son, keep at it.

SuperSonic

fanks everyone....
cheered me up an ickle...

mc-logie

YER thats gd u should b a poet as well

ive got i dont think its any gd but everey1 says it is

i look at u lookin at me
i no i like wot i see
i c ur eyes
i c ur smile
b'in with u makes it all worth wild
to me i think oh yes its true
(lady ice) i think i love you..

(lady ice) soz used ur name as example

KRYSIZ MC

Lady Ice, ooooh!

SuperSonic

I could only write like dat coz i woz proper upset...
Most da time i ave $$$$ all interestin 2 write bout.

SuperSonic

Bump