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idiosyncratic88

heyy, this is unfinishd but can u telll me wat u think? plzz??

i got these words goin round in my head
almost eruptin theyre desperate to be said
they jus keep comin my heads gettin fed
with all these words that need to be said
some rhymes creep into my mind jus out of nowher
they wont budge anchored in and forever be here
these words make it obvious, they make it so clear
that they'll be driftin thru da air and ringin in ur ear
tot da point wher it will make u wanna blare
it out and then u'll declare
that blastin it out has made u worse for wear
my words u see r in continuous prose
ull see it blossom from a bud 2 a rose
u can try 2 imitate but u wont come close
it'll be full of ur bull$$$$ n ur endless woes
these words are chosen carefully, so intricate
who ever wouldve thought id be so articulate
i watch every detail so meticulous
this compostition of words is so ingenious
if u examin the it'll make u curious
it'll make u furious n u'll be wondering y i aint infamous

thanx, would really appreciate feedback