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Old 24-01-2006, 09:27 PM   #1
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post Open mik - What the $$$$ im fightin 4

agen this piece was a quik tin......

open to all comments and feebaks on how to improve , sfe

(4eva elevatin)


[Verse 1]

Long ago, mother said, ‘Daughter work hard and earn’
This life is full of fallen paths so, Work hard and learn
I neva knew my way, Lost by shattered myths and dreams
From a teen, its always been, the hardest way that lead to me
I thought for once id break the pain and spread my dormant wings
But climbed up, only to fall down, life aint always what it seems
I cry, But im neva heard in this cold and woeful world
And its hard enough to bare the stress of bein a lonely girl
Deprived by what I dreamed while others endured eternal bliss
Ive missed, old times ive reminisced, but only led to this
A distorted soul crushed by, weightful pain and burden
Enslaved in bars of tears but foreva will I serve them
I let the oceans guide my flow as waves clap and thrust
No longer is this world of lust, which gave-up-on-us

[Chorus]

Locked in these bars,im doin time, but god is on my mind
Who helped me through the rainy days when death was right behind
Turned back only to see my future grave before my eyes
Death has ever mourned for ‘why this girl is still alive?’
Don’t know why I carry on coz love is hard to find
My heart beats-for-these-rhymes which have always touched my mind

[Verse 2]

Its funny how these words can, lead-down-deep to how I feel
And instantly wipe my tears away with sounds that sound so real
My passion for writing rhymes is what keeps me on my feet
And these lyrics are strong with power coz it keeps us off the street
Instead of letting our hearts arrive, misguided by our brain
And letting wrongs-of-the-world devour our true and lawful name
We must fight for truth and justice coz knowledge leads us the way
But were taught to hustle our life from societies today
These words I preach from experience of livvin life behind ‘bars’
Expressivly expressin emotions and pray that they take me far
Lyrically healing my roots but, actions convesate louder than words
With revolutionary success, we could change this world
I lay my pen to rest , till the ink may flow no more
And lead my hands to prayer, coz what the f.u.c.k im fightin for?


[Chorus]

Locked in these bars,im doin time, but god is on my mind
Who helped me through the rainy days when death was right behind
Turned back only to see my future grave before my eyes
Death has ever mourned for ‘why this girl id still alive?’
Don’t know why I carry on coz love is hard to find
My heart beats-for-these-rhymes which have always touched my mind
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Old 25-01-2006, 08:57 AM   #2
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yeah Lady, do that $$$$. I like this. Deep lyrics and a good flow. Keep goin' Lady!!
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Old 25-01-2006, 12:56 PM   #3
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thnx, coolio lol
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Old 25-01-2006, 03:50 PM   #4
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feebk plz
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Old 25-01-2006, 04:11 PM   #5
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Deprived by what I dreamed while others endured eternal bliss
Ive missed, old times ive reminisced, but only led to this
A distorted soul crushed by, weightful pain and burden
Enslaved in bars of tears but foreva will I serve them
I let the oceans guide my flow as waves clap and thrust
No longer is this world of lust, which gave-up-on-us


Those three bars are my favourite. The flow is wicked, and the syllables just roll with the next line.
The whole drop is like this. I wanna find something negative so this doesn't sound like I'm arse kissing, but I can't.
I like the topic, it's always a good picking a melancholic subject cos you can get real emotion into the rhymes.
This board is gettin' good now everyone's stop beefing. People are being creative, and just dropping nuff good rhymes, mainly Lady Lyrical here with this gem, and Herbalt. I would say myself too, but hey, I'm too modest.
Everyone of your drops have been $$$$ hot. i managed to get time to read 'em, but I'm still gonna print 'em out and read them in more detail.
Big up yourself Lady. Now I see why your advice was spot on
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Old 26-01-2006, 04:01 PM   #6
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Originally Posted By: lady_lyrical_00

agen this piece was a quik tin......

open to all comments and feebaks on how to improve , sfe

(4eva elevatin)


[Verse 1]

Long ago, mother said, ‘Daughter work hard and earn’
This life is full of fallen paths so, Work hard and learn
I neva knew my way, Lost by shattered myths and dreams
From a teen, its always been, the hardest way that lead to me
I thought for once id break the pain and spread my dormant wings
But climbed up, only to fall down, life aint always what it seems
I cry, But im neva heard in this cold and woeful world
And its hard enough to bare the stress of bein a lonely girl
Deprived by what I dreamed while others endured eternal bliss
Ive missed, old times ive reminisced, but only led to this
A distorted soul crushed by, weightful pain and burden
Enslaved in bars of tears but foreva will I serve them
I let the oceans guide my flow as waves clap and thrust
No longer is this world of lust, which gave-up-on-us

[Chorus]

Locked in these bars,im doin time, but god is on my mind
Who helped me through the rainy days when death was right behind
Turned back only to see my future grave before my eyes
Death has ever mourned for ‘why this girl is still alive?’
Don’t know why I carry on coz love is hard to find
My heart beats-for-these-rhymes which have always touched my mind

[Verse 2]

Its funny how these words can, lead-down-deep to how I feel
And instantly wipe my tears away with sounds that sound so real
My passion for writing rhymes is what keeps me on my feet
And these lyrics are strong with power coz it keeps us off the street
Instead of letting our hearts arrive, misguided by our brain
And letting wrongs-of-the-world devour our true and lawful name
We must fight for truth and justice coz knowledge leads us the way
But were taught to hustle our life from societies today
These words I preach from experience of livvin life behind ‘bars’
Expressivly expressin emotions and pray that they take me far
Lyrically healing my roots but, actions convesate louder than words
With revolutionary success, we could change this world
I lay my pen to rest , till the ink may flow no more
And lead my hands to prayer, coz what the f.u.c.k im fightin for?


[Chorus]

Locked in these bars,im doin time, but god is on my mind
Who helped me through the rainy days when death was right behind
Turned back only to see my future grave before my eyes
Death has ever mourned for ‘why this girl id still alive?’
Don’t know why I carry on coz love is hard to find
My heart beats-for-these-rhymes which have always touched my mind

very nice
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thanx
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Old 03-06-2006, 12:52 PM   #8
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[QUOTE=ladyfuryh2o]yo gyal, all i'm gonna say is you are sick man, i think you should become number 1 cuz there's not many female asians who can rap like you & me so go gyal and keep on representing female asians. my hotmailis address ;nadhianisah314@hotmail.co.uk.if any guys wanna chat.
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Old 04-06-2006, 11:06 AM   #9
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ty for the comment, tryna elevate still....so uno
feed on this otha lyrik wen u get tym (clik the link)

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