Open Mik,,peep Then Feed

lady_lyrical_00

HEY IM NEW TO UK MUSIC, IM FRM ANOTHA FORUM, RAPVERSE
THIS IS A QUIK OPEN MIK NOTTA BATTLE SO PEEP N FEED THNX


best u leave rap



[Verse 1]

I see the tears role down this girls cheek
Locks herself in the room, mans givin her greif
Crystal drops of rage fall splashin on the bed
No sense of self security encaged in his bred
A ruptured soul, she lays peacefully in her room
Like a newborn encased inside her mothers womb
While her mans out for chicken heads on the run
Cumin back with no paper - That man got Bun'd


[Chorus - Rap]

Girl u kno u doin wrong wen u say u wanna stay
Everyday is the same, neva change y u pay?
U say he still loves you & u say that he's tryin
Spen hours heelin cuts in yor room an still cryin
Still applyin.......But instead yor internally die'n
U gotta realise soon or later this is true
It's best u leave now before he ends up leavin u


[Verse2]

She knows what he do an she knows were he be's
Wanderin when the tears of pain would finally cease
I wonda y this girl's still taggin on da lead,
Still helpin him to breed, Man is best dat she Leave,
But $$$$ dun change she's scared of gettin beaten down
To the ground, nothins changed, shes lettin him clown
She can't accept the truth, her paths built on skeptism
Livin life each day - In this way, She's imprisoned


[Chorus - Rap]

Girl u kno u doin wrong wen u say u wanna stay
Everyday is the same, neva change y u pay?
U say he still loves you & u say that he's tryin
Spen hours heelin cuts in yor room an still cryin
Still applyin.......But instead yor internally die'n
U gotta realise soon or later this is true
It's best u leave now before he ends up leavin u



(while gyal wlkin out)


[Verse 3]

I see her now, Shes made her choice, walkin out for gud
Exile from sufferin, endin pain i wish she could
Realise what's best, yet she relies on her heart
Ripped apart, an thrown away is only right they part
Is gunna take a while, alotta heelin to accomplish
U gotta run that mile, rebuild yor life and not demolish
The good memories before u chose to tie the knot
Thort u'd giv it all you got but now is time that u forgot



[Chorus - Rap]

Girl u kno u doin wrong wen u say u wanna stay
Everyday is the same, neva change y u pay?
U say he still loves you & u say that he's tryin
Spen hours heelin cuts in yor room an still cryin
Still applyin.......But instead yor internally die'n
U gotta realise soon or later this is true
It's best u leave now before he ends up leavin u



[Echoe Endin]

......ends up leavin u......ends up leavin u

Is best you leave now before he ends up leavin u
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j-kid1

i cnt b bovered readin it right now coz it l8 and my eyes hurt, i read the first verse and i like it, ill read the rest and give u feedbak l8r

TOP_SHOTTA

top stuff ! another deep piece of work !

lady_lyrical_00

thnx arfan .... most apriciated ,

Tazer

Fukkin hell..u like yer deep stuff dun ya? Real good tho...U get sum beats and sum effects 4 dat and it'll sound sikk, gurl.....Do you battle? I know u can write deep sh*t but i'd like 2 c wat yer like in a battle situation. Go to the ONLINE RAP KREW thread and diss my boi Karnage in 8 bars max. Wud u be interested in joinin our krew den??