Open Challenge

[kd0t]

Bored at work. Not spat in ages. Joined the forums. Havent seen anything to rate so far hopefully theres talent out there. lol and yea i hope i do sound arrogant, but seriously if you can only write lyrics up to garage/grime levels please dont respond.


2nd post on the forums: free
coming across as a right pr*ck: priceless

[kd0t]

anyone online like right now and up for a battle i work til 6 so between my work and writing bars should easily get a few rounds in at least. come on alleviate my boredom!

k.

[MC_blaze_yh]

im looking 4 sum skill
av took every1 down n nead a new thrill
so i come t u t c wha u can do
plz plz gimmi a reply or u wont have a clue
but look dha bars getting faster
ur bird all $$$$ her like Italian pastor
im mc blaze iv got the carbonization
ur getting mixed up with an allgerbration equation
ur names kdot
i was begging t mix it up 4 idiot
looking at you looking at me
finking lord how’s he make it look so easy
your mouth is gawking
plz shut up talking
while im doin my bars
$$$$ with me and ill send u 2 mars
after that u go to Venus
you have only just worked out you have a small penise
blaze blaze haha your messing wif blaze
carry on messing your gona get erased
by me i find it easy
down in mixi
all dha MCs have packed it in as a bad job
now they go round suckin nob
listen to me this int your profession
dnt evan dare turn round and say uno but its an obsession
Yh it blaze on production

[Battle_Scar]

ii see your looking for skill
uve found iiT
best cum online and clash me
or iss iit too late and u wiil get grounded !
now im showing u wat i can do
u aint carbonising ShiiT ur a broke back biiTch wit a lil DiiiK
from the west side ov tha UK
making all dopey ass mc'z look gay
listen blud i set the standard
step up to me boy u will get pared
like me ii will leave ur body scarred
now i think iiTz tiime i left thiis forum
before ii rowl up and die of boredom !!!

[kd0t]

okay first off, you both, need to work on your spelling fam/
acting illiterate will never make you a badda man//
I'll start with blaze, nice irony you're barely a spark/
You lack heat in your bars, thats why you aint leaving a mark//

Only line that i liked was algebration equation/
the rest was a let down your talent evasion's amazing//
Now on to the other pretender, u reckon ur war torn/
and got battle scars, your battle bars luke warm//

but K can be supportive: keep practicing spitting/
your mum gave up, made the mistake of you living//
cant be helped she got the name of a crack whore/
and get put on the track, with d*ck in her jaw//

I'm a child of destiny, i can get another you in a minute/
want proof? switch the kids, cant tell the difference//
Let them spit, they're $$$$, to me this the special olympics/
Cos even when i win, get no props from the critics//

[Jake_WNZ]

Wow, a forum freestyle battle, this I gotta $$$$in see,
first time I've ever heard a rapper point out illiteracy,
Let alone from a guy called registered user: kd0t,
And this is coming from a bloke called W-N-$$$$in-Z!

There's nothing I can do to further mock that $$$$er: Battle scar,
His rhymes are weak and is cheesier than battlestar galactica,
Using words so simple u'd think he had Hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliophobia,
I mean, come on, you must have learned some $$$$in words, back in school inbetween the herpes and the ringworm... ok that was harsh, and a generalisation,
but throughout the nation those without education tend to suffer irritation,
probably as a result of incestious relations,
hold on, I was supposed to be rhyming something with "phobia",
$$$$ it, no-one will notice, if they're still reading this they're probably at their 10th beer,
trying really hard to focus on the words,
and to read it out-loud but their voices are slurred,
then they try to type back in their drunken daze,
it will be $$$$, but no $$$$ter than MC Blaze!

[kd0t]

when i first read your bars, i thought they were $$$$.
Then i come on here started again and was like they are alright.
Then got to the end and im not replying to that $$$$. Step your game up.
Your rhyme scheme is poor or none existent, i doubt you can fit Hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliophobia into a line on its own let alone in the middle of a sentence, meaning you basically vomitted on the page and hoped it made sense.

You finished on an odd line, so either you find it hard to keep the beat or your layout is too sh!tty to bother with.


and this:

Let alone from a guy called registered user: kd0t,

.......theres so much wrong with that and is terrible when put with your next line:


And this is coming from a bloke called W-N-$$$$in-Z!

weakness like that is why im not replying...

[Jake_WNZ]

Hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliophobia runs through 2 lines, only the first 4 lines are in 4/4, after that the beat switches to 3/4. Also, thats not me trying to be clever, its cus im stupid enough to rap to my m8's drum solo (it just happened to be playing on my iTunes at the time). Besides, I'm not actually a serious rapper, i just felt like $$$$ing about.