On the edge.........

Bob_the_rascal

Something i wrote up.....

I'm walking on the edge of life's tightrope//
my visionary forms a nightshade nightscope//
battling with battlescars from the stench of a trench-coat//
puffing the rawness of the new hiphop hope//
my lust for the scandalism means the forces can elope//
and the everlasting verses are biblical like the pope//
the chronoligical meltdown and my cutting of the throat//
the weak//
survive off tongue and cheek in a councillors office//
i help them im the lone-ranger prophet//
i cant stop this//
imaginary manifested mind-state//
invisible forces takeover till blood vessels pop the phosphate//
my melanin squeezes goodness from the misplaced hate race//
this gate stays open to most entitled with face-paint//
i water-colour turquoise landfills and landscapes//
hot-headed at the top of the foodchains//
my character ravishes and changes into electrical mains//

im on the edge//
suffering the vows from my pledge//
the sledgehammer excruciating the dead//

the last chapter//
mapping my thoughts through my karma//
ripping through pavements stopping speed in a mazda//
i depict mammals from the dino years//
darwin the evolunist takes me for a walk with his ears//
and the expressed feelings from my peers//
tell me i should stop sufficating my dark lonely years//
where i was i trapped in a freeze-frame//
re-dressing the names of the fame//
maming your existing turning into lame//
im outbound, got up and re-embersed my name//
my vocabulary is being re-furbished in my brain//
the mantra puffin out smoke on the antartic//
polar bears camouflage from the darkness//
i swim in waters and remeber te four-fathers//
sun, wind, rain and snow was the starters//
this predicament is anything but retarded//
im on the edge from the departed//


im on the edge//
suffering the vows from my pledge//
the sledgehammer excruciating the dead//

criticism and replies would be welcome.....

e.k.s

that is heavy man, did u really make that up

GreEd_4_SpeEd

nice text, i liked it alot, it kinda sounded like a poem though, nice thought, real good, real good

Bob_the_rascal

yeah i did it, i dont bite anyone, im an original. i just explore my knowledge of words and my vocab. it's the lyrics im worried about, if they ain't good then i dont put em in. but i know the meanings of the words aswell, not just put them in there for the sake of it.

big up eks and greed, safe.

e.k.s

LMFAO@meaning of the words, yeah man it is heavy still, so much detail

Bob_the_rascal

safe eks

wait...........LMFAO.....wot does it mean again im blank

e.k.s

<----means that son