ODP vs Dusty Skidz- tournement round 1- group 1

odp

once both emcees check in ..lyrics must be dropped in 48 hours- ..

everyone has 24 to check in from 21:30 pm gmt 31st jan.

u know the rules...to verses of 4 bars...each..then voting will take place.


check in_1st

odp

check mayne

DustySkidz

I'm there dude

DustySkidz

Check 2nd, i'm in. You goin first?

odp

drop whenever u have written them....i will wirte probb after some lunch

HypNa

sum 1 drop at least

odp

sorry i went to football

HypNa

hasnt this battle gone over time limit??????

odp

yea read the top - get the $$$$ ou this thread...got nothin to do with u


48 hours..dusty signed in yesterday...

DustySkidz

ODP, $$$$,
You ain't got no gift,
Vocabulary wack and you spittin' like a b*tch,
B*itch, $$$$,
You should take the fifth,
You can't $$$$ing spit,
So b*tch listen to my $$$$,
You got simple rhymes, cos you a simple person,
This whole entire rap is a $$$$ing aspersion,
Cos i'm gonna run up on you with this degregation,
On your character,
I'm gonna tell the nation
You came here wit no skills,
But you is trying to battle,
Are you $$$$ing crazy man!?
You up $$$$ creek with no paddle,
And you starting to sink,
$$$$ coming over the sides,
You on your way down,
Dusty Skidz on the rise
Suprised?
Well, you shouldn't be,
Just look in the mirror,
Or read your rhymes back,
'Cos then maybe then you'll see clearer,
The reason why I had to step up and diss,
Your whole $$$$ing style and then call you a b*tch

odp

The crusty, musty lust of dusty must be wrong ya must trust me/

Rapper debris, remains of battered emcee’s wipe u away or feather dust-thee/

Seedy, sour, got u clocked like chuk-d but without the power/

I need food, im a civil right’s cat spittin slogan to lyrically devour/

Dirt off my shoulder, blow dust in your face /

Galatic assumption, ‘im gon send im te outa space’/

Print me off, get paper cuts, seepin like a stake medum rare/

The aggressive nature of this du’ resmbles that of the of last care bear/


Cant cut the mustard, let alone have his cake/

A fine feelin of hunger, u cant win that’s ur only mistake/

I bleed power, soar at this $$$$$ an bring him down like twin tower/

U clean, u shower, live life to the fullest but your lyrics don’t empower/

Im cold as ice, my car skidz. An runs over this beat mouse/

Quiet litle critter, $$$$$ statred getting biiter pops fukin babysitta in own house/

Ouch – the tension is killing him, crushing every single limb/

Zim zala bim, no magic that I got u slim, money at the bookies cus im headin for a win/

Vexster

dusty

odp

^kooman ...bu can u explain it--read the rules...

odp

vote please


vex
*Punches (personal attacks on the emcee)
*Flow (how well the words go together the basically how smooth it sounds)
*Creativity (how different and how creative you verse is e.g. not rapping about the same thing over and over again)
*World play (metaphors smart use of words etc, e.g. these don’t want beef their vegetarians
*Humor (I don't need to explain this one)

Vexster

duno about any rules cant see them.

duno you just wasnt on time with your rhyms or somethin n dusty was just flowin n just goin all out you was talkin about your appetite sry but thats my opinion init

odp

ok then...


we need food...civil rights..black panthers''no anyway..


.......vote away peeps then i cant set up the next round an table

delight_21

im votin odp on his creativity an humour, and word play

dusty skidz bit like somthin off roll deep, very good word play but should make it more interestin and flow with style, change of style would help aswell

HypNa

Punches: odp easily for me
Flow: i sorta lost ur flow a bit dusty...ODP
creativity: nice from both sides....tied
wordplay: not much to choose from ....Odp just
Overall..... ODP ..........nice battle guys

holy_smokes

Punches - ODP

Flow - Dusty

Creativity - ODP

Wordplay - ODP

Humour - TiE

Overall - ODP

To sum up this battle it need a bit more humour or thuggish elements to bring it to higher level.