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I-RoNiK

Uninspired, I cant think and i'm tired
got so much goin on lately that i feel like im wired
one wrong move n i'm ready to blow
got no control, over the emotions that i really wanna show
so i'm sat ere with this ben before this page
tryna write my life so i can act it out on my stage
i feel like a fake, like i've lost my identity
but i know there are some things in life that are meant to be
Not this though, all i am is my skin an bones
i cant handle this way of Life, so my spirits flown
to try an find a place, that i can feel safe in
already feel better with this, energy that im savin

im pavin the way, i've even started to prey!
now all i want is the government to increase my pay
no delay, in fact im all for equal rights,
an if ya dont agree its cuz yer rich and yer tight!
get no delight from your rich fellow friends,
so ya draw out the cheque book n then buy you a benz
its immense, spendin cash like its endless
oh, excuse me, i forgot, cuz to you its relentless
i dont resent this, i'm really not the type
i'd rather be the underdog then part of the hype


feel like i'm livin in an episode of bernards watch, the time has stopped
n its been nineteen long-years-on before my bodys clocked
while i been out all night dad's probably been at the bottle
my strength is wearing thin, cuz im ridin on full throttle
but it gets me no-where on this uphill struggle
when my heart talks to my mouth my words come out in a muddle
n mums no longer here so she cant pick up the pieces
im tryin hard 2 help but i can't 'iron out my creases'
so i'm slowly learnin to take some eggs out the basket
cuz there's nothin worse in life den seein yer mam in a casket
this cars $$$$ my gas is runnin on empty
one day mam i'll pay back all the love that you lent me

If I left with no goodbyes i'm wonderin if you would realize
cuz i dont think youd notice, an im fed up with all the lies
I got enough on my place but still ya seem to insist
it feels like every time you talk your words come out with a twist
I wanna quit, but somethin inside just wont let me
not quite sure why coz all this does is upset me
with all that i've been through i still cant learn from my mistakes
i feel like a fool and my whole life is a piss take
for once i wish that things would go right
i wish that i could make it through just one sleepless night
with all my might i try, i think that i can pull through
but in the meantime the only name on my lips, belongs to you.

defiance

what the $$$$ was the point u was trying to put across? the first verse was like u was losing inspiration, then it went on to money, then ya mum, and then the last verse was like u was rapping about a yat...wtf?

I-RoNiK

yeah yeah, it was 4 seperate verses but whass the point in postin em all seperate?
Its only rough lyrics ite i havent structured it or nothin its just the raw words that came out of my mouth in that way, an sometimes its better for me, because then i can look back and see how i really feel.

DustySkidz

So what if the topics changed? It's all about what you feel, not necessarily a point to put across. I'm definitley feeling this cos it's from the heart

defiance

“	Originally Posted By: DustySkidz So what if the topics changed? It's all about what you feel, not necessarily a point to put across. I'm definitley feeling this cos it's from the heart	”

i wasnt knocking the guy man...its just the song wasnt consisant, u get into what a guys chatting, then the subjects flipped and u fall off the flow for a second......but yeah, nice work

I-RoNiK

LOL for cryin out loud!!

IM A GIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!

I like to keep ya on ur toes!! nah its like I said it was just raw like thats the way it came out on the paper like frees, it wasnt a proper verse or nuttin!

x

e.k.s

it's nice to express what's on the mind. You could easily chop n switch it up.

Nice to see gurlies reppin up in hea still

lady fury

This is the real deepest $$$$ you'll ever hear trus me...birmingham ,london ,n.o.d.b,yo cheack it feel my bass feel my treble give u tears dat make u tremble it's 4 years i've been mental take a visit 2 ya temple ,make u speer like you penci ,i drop it like it's hot ,u ppl drop it like it's gentle,u pr!ckz need to stop and drop it how u ment 2,
yo i try u climb up high but diz whole dat i'm livin in dere'z no ppl singing the world geeting worse 4 da next generation ,we jus beginging killing selling drugz 2 women killing the beat dat iz in em,but i'm jus trying 2 make money unaware dat we share it honey,slowly hunting da little ppl it's lyk we live it funny,but i wanna succseed , to succseed i gotta show how much money means but everybody is getting gready 4 more and diz iz gunna start another war....


commentz wanted... cheack out ma open mic page called deepest lyrics.

e.k.s

It was ok i guess :|

Lack of depth and possibly you might wanna spit about something out of the norm

but yeah you trying, and that's cool..

xeksx