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Old 04-01-2006, 03:54 PM   #1
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Just another Job

Mind in frame, emotions the same-
physically alert - revert from blame-
Customers assured they feel no pain-
Glocks are clocked, suitcase locked-
Dedicated to a job all guilt is blocked-
Scope is packed - i got some sacks-
Final check the rope aint slacked-
Carefully prepared for any attack-
Pulse is racing i convice myself-
Start to focus on the art of stealth-
My position important sacred the place-
That ends a life like 'a hammer from grace'-
My fear like the weather it thunders alot-
Finger'z are poised ive the 'hands of god'-
No hatred or remorse to blur my sight-
I extinguish candles bring shadows to light-
''For a price i bring their judgement day''
Food on the table why'd god's judgement sway?-
Just another job im confident in breath-
All i have left is bring life to death-
Layed to rest in seconds the weights are ridden-
Bag the body and i complete my mission
The jobs asstute no eyebrows raised-
A meer shake of the hand workmanship praised-

Crit?
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Old 04-01-2006, 05:35 PM   #2
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niceness man..nicessness...


by anychance do u call urself excel on other sites..?
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Old 04-01-2006, 05:38 PM   #3
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Nah Ex Calibur Mostly Thanx uppin for more crit
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Old 04-01-2006, 05:48 PM   #4
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yea man thems sum sick lines.....oi Dr get on msn fool
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