New 8 Bars freestyle

[Jest]

Not bad, but basic like alot of that could of used multi rhymes and creative wordplay, not bad for a an early effort, but thats just what I'd say.

[Lil.Jay]

Lil Jay new bwoi in the market
got a new aim yeah i got a new target
had an idea and now im bouta spark it
soz its a secret but its some smart s**t
the top of the game, ive passed it
gettin higher like a stoner on a hard spliff
any beat you throw at me, couple of hours id hav pard it
big bruvah gonna help, no way, he darked it
man come to my town and chat s**t
talk bout metal nah $$$$$ you got plastic
say you grab strally nah i no you you grab d**k
saw the stanley and man grabbed it
the game in the present ive unrapped it
got raw talent i dont practise

(jus sumin i thort id share) lol

[phippsyyyy]

eder im far from that,
my m sport 5 carbon black,
i talk to the dead like wiley,
when i say that i mean these s*** Mc's that aint never ever sold one CD,
but somehow think they can chat too me,
when im drivin a car and there ridin a ped, BLUD,
dunna wats going though there head,
chattin bear s*** its like clash clash clash and they pick up the mic and talk about mash,
i said he aint done one CD, probably aint even shot one bb, probably aint shot one little pellet,
when you wanna come clash with ME!! forget it,
your hype forget it, yeah i said it,
when i call my name you need more credit!!!!

[BornNBredPothed]

theres nuff mischief that goes on in ma head
tommi be naggin at me like what till am dead
dont be misslead ill lay bullets in ur bred
ill shred ya like a cotton thread
use ya maaz hole like a noose coz its loose thats what her pimp said
catch some skank flu off the diseased moose
a bin down with the blues dancin to whats on the news
its a pity u cant choose when u win or lose
a be all like dude gimme ur phone
u be all like ok dude ur well ard an dat pullin a gat at ma back while im alone an dat
an i be like yea blud am from ormskirk liverpool yea
am 2 cool 4 school daddyo chug an alcopop inta me gut then am like FOOOOL
a be bussin on u theres nout u can do cept run away u fukin tool
bak 2 me shed them voices are bak agen sit on me stool an fink 2meself im uber cool what ya na thats what the voices said

end off pease out rrrrrrrrespect shadda

i actually only wanted 2 do like 4 bars so i kinda rambled for the rest o well will try do 8 nex time ha sweeeet narmean narf

[mc-leathal-bfd]

RIGHT YOU THINK UR DA REAL MC N IF U R DEN Y DONT U CHALLANGE ME IM FROM DA DA REAL STREETZ WE GIVE DA REAL BEATZ WE GOT LAMBOZ N RANGIES WITH REAL LEATHER GUCCI SEATZ ITZ A BRADFORD TING U DONT NO HOW TO RAP OR SING U JUST GOT DA FAKE ASS $BLING$ I GOT DOPE IN THE BACK SEAT COPS CANT CATCH ME IM UNTOUCHABLE IM LIKE A FERARRI IM SUPER CHARGED IM UNSTOPPABLE I RIDE WITH A V12 NOT A V6 I CUT CORNERS LIKE A PRO MY PEDALS FLAT TO THE FLOOR THE LIGHTS STILL RED BUT FOR ME THAT MEANS GO YOU NO THE SCORE BRADFORDS ON TOP FUK LEEDS OR BATTALY US Gs NEVER STOP TWO TWENTY ON THE CLOCK YES NOW THATZ SPEED 4 YAH STRAIGHT WHACKED IT INTO 6TH GEAR..... WHAT WAS THAT I DINT HEAR YAH THE ENGINES TOOO LOUD ITZ ROARING N MY WHEELS ARE ROLLING UR PROBABLY BAWWLIN THINKIN THIS GUYS TO SIKKK WITH THE REAL BARRZ TRY 2 BEAT THIS ... OHHH SORRRY U CANT HAA FUK WITH US ULL GET THE DEEEP SCARZ !!!!