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Old 18-07-2007, 08:50 AM   #1
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Default "Never Sit Back" plz review!

heya decided to write a remix to Fort Minor's Remember the Name nd spinned off a bit to end up wit this. lemme know what u think!

I knew this kid once,
He was called Rich,
This is how his story goes.

Yo, this is just a man with a mic
Who wanted nothing more than just to get his rhymes on site
He was 17, a man of passion and devoted respect
Reliable, he would never defect
He walked with a swagger and he talked with a sway
Which undeniably helps with what you’re trying to portray

It wasn’t all great though he had some bad habits,
At 19, Cocaine became an addiction, the crucifixion of an obvious jurisdiction, mixed between the friction of his current constrictions.
And then on that cold winter’s day it all came to a stop,
Shot, stabbed, oiled and hammered,
It was like this poor guy had been killed just for his standards
The guy fought for his pride and he fought for his name
But in the end 8 to 1 was too tough a task
At those odds the poor guy was never gonna last.

(chorus)
Never sit back, never retract,
You’ve got to keep workin’
Never withdraw, Never relax
You’ve got to be determined.
If you can’t walk the walk
Then just don’t walk at all
If it ain’t 200%
You’re fu**in bound to fall.

I remember how he used to have a diary with quotes inside,
Of a dream that only he could achieve.
Merciless execution cos he’s dying inside himself
He felt for the 3rd world he felt for the poor
He’d always support whoever knocked at his door
He wasn’t arrogant just wanted respect
Although his own ambitions you could never suspect
A peaceful world was what he hoped to resurrect
But dude. That ain’t gonna happen yet.

When he was young he was bullied, abused they’d even spit on his shoes
It was like a, personal vendetta against this unlucky youth
No one to turn to, no where to run
And if he tried to confront them they’d simply pull out a gun
Personal, humiliation on the lowest foundation
By some cowardly kids who supported racial discrimination
But he turned it around, he used the harshest rejection as a fuel to reach the goal of a greater perfection
He’d faced what he was and adjusted himself

(chorus Repeat)
(chorus Repeat)
I hope we can all take something away from this
PEACE

JD.

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Old 18-07-2007, 04:38 PM   #2
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its better then half the lyrics iv seen on the site?...
There's a last open space on the Spitfire Tournament, enter if you want? but you gotta get bck to me, be4 some body else takes the place.
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Old 18-07-2007, 05:27 PM   #3
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Originally Posted By: DarkHorizon

its better then half the lyrics iv seen on the site?...
There's a last open space on the Spitfire Tournament, enter if you want? but you gotta get bck to me, be4 some body else takes the place.


Cheers for the comment. Sorry, whats a spitfire tourney? lol
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Old 18-07-2007, 07:50 PM   #4
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maaannn thattt is sik sik sik


that goes wiv the instrumental as well if u youtube it and listen and read da barzzz its sik


respect to you


u shud join the tornament we're pending on one mc

u just read all the details at the top of the forums
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Old 18-07-2007, 07:53 PM   #5
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you shud lay that down as a trak as well
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Old 20-07-2007, 09:33 AM   #6
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Hey, just read those lyrics, I dont actually know the original but I know those bars are $$$$in amazing!!!!! you got some tight rhymes!! x
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Old 22-07-2007, 01:47 AM   #7
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Nuff Respect Brudda! This ah good piece..fa real! From Tha Heart! Madd Respect on this!!


Originally Posted By: the1JD

heya decided to write a remix to Fort Minor's Remember the Name nd spinned off a bit to end up wit this. lemme know what u think!

I knew this kid once,
He was called Rich,
This is how his story goes.

Yo, this is just a man with a mic
Who wanted nothing more than just to get his rhymes on site
He was 17, a man of passion and devoted respect
Reliable, he would never defect
He walked with a swagger and he talked with a sway
Which undeniably helps with what you’re trying to portray

It wasn’t all great though he had some bad habits,
At 19, Cocaine became an addiction, the crucifixion of an obvious jurisdiction, mixed between the friction of his current constrictions.
And then on that cold winter’s day it all came to a stop,
Shot, stabbed, oiled and hammered,
It was like this poor guy had been killed just for his standards
The guy fought for his pride and he fought for his name
But in the end 8 to 1 was too tough a task
At those odds the poor guy was never gonna last.

(chorus)
Never sit back, never retract,
You’ve got to keep workin’
Never withdraw, Never relax
You’ve got to be determined.
If you can’t walk the walk
Then just don’t walk at all
If it ain’t 200%
You’re fu**in bound to fall.

I remember how he used to have a diary with quotes inside,
Of a dream that only he could achieve.
Merciless execution cos he’s dying inside himself
He felt for the 3rd world he felt for the poor
He’d always support whoever knocked at his door
He wasn’t arrogant just wanted respect
Although his own ambitions you could never suspect
A peaceful world was what he hoped to resurrect
But dude. That ain’t gonna happen yet.

When he was young he was bullied, abused they’d even spit on his shoes
It was like a, personal vendetta against this unlucky youth
No one to turn to, no where to run
And if he tried to confront them they’d simply pull out a gun
Personal, humiliation on the lowest foundation
By some cowardly kids who supported racial discrimination
But he turned it around, he used the harshest rejection as a fuel to reach the goal of a greater perfection
He’d faced what he was and adjusted himself

(chorus Repeat)
(chorus Repeat)
I hope we can all take something away from this
PEACE

JD.
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Old 22-07-2007, 10:09 AM   #8
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abu why do u always quote people ur onli ment to do it when they're are loads of people and theyre not sure hu u r talking to ur mayb proving a point
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Old 23-07-2007, 11:39 PM   #9
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I think thats a site technical problem because I didnt hit the "quote" button, I clicked on "reply" and the quote thing is always in the box when I do that, just like now..so I have no idea what will happen if I clicked on "quote"...lol...


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abu why do u always quote people ur onli ment to do it when they're are loads of people and theyre not sure hu u r talking to ur mayb proving a point
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