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MY barz tell meh if der gd or nt nd how 2 make dem betta init

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02-06-2008, 12:01 PM	#1
DdotB Registered User Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 3	MY barz tell meh if der gd or nt nd how 2 make dem betta init wen Spit My 21 Bars der Hot Like Tar i'll Soon Be A Star I Will Never Go Away U Will Never Get far i'll Banged Your Mum In My Car i'll Use My Teeth 2 Rip Her Bra Yo boyz U Cnt Chat Yo boyz U Cant Rap Come 2 My Endz And My Gun Will Go Brapppp I Coming 4 U U Better Buy A Gat Smash U Up With My Baseball Bat Just Admit Im sick afta i while u'll be suckin $$$$ u make ya mum look like a stupid $$$$$ straight up u can't merk meh u need sum work g givin it on msn dats hardly a sin gna clash u im gna win i may nt be rich but i still gt a $$$$$ spit in ya face break your jaw looks like u guys r neva goin on tour bang ya mum on ya bedroom floor

02-06-2008, 01:57 PM	#2
MUSKK_2008 Registered User Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 144	If your new to spitting your ok, keep it up

02-06-2008, 06:03 PM	#3
Cruel-T Registered User Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 56	If you're new, yeah you're .. alright. Try not to take four lines in a row, rhyming one word ex: tar, star, far, car It gets abit repetitive. Change it up abit and you'll improve alot more. Its good, though.

02-06-2008, 06:29 PM	#4
DdotB Registered User Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 3	thanks for dat yea i will try change dem a bit thats just a quick freestyle i dne im tryna sort out makin a mixtape just starting off wrighting da barz for the tracks

06-06-2008, 02:14 AM

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Originally Posted By: DdotB

thanks for dat yea i will try change dem a bit thats just a quick freestyle i dne im tryna sort out makin a mixtape just starting off wrighting da barz for the tracks
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Good luck, keep tryin'.
I remember how it felt to have my tapes reviewed, and then I moved up.
I'm going to post Youtube videos of my performances and such.

I have a nice underground deal heading up.

07-06-2008, 11:37 PM

DdotB

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Originally Posted By: Cruel-T

Good luck, keep tryin'.
I remember how it felt to have my tapes reviewed, and then I moved up.
I'm going to post Youtube videos of my performances and such.

I have a nice underground deal heading up.
”

it wud be gd 2 do sum sh!t wit u sumtyme fam man holla at meh wen u gt ya stuff uploaded

02-07-2008, 11:25 AM	#7
Swinky Registered User Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 20	too one dimensional i'd say!! you need to advance ya tecnique and vocab!!

07-07-2008, 11:16 AM	#8
W10 Registered User Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 20	Id tend to agree with Swinky. Im new on here yeah. Your flow is a little basic, If I were you Id try to use more syllable rhyming and try to focus on the meaning of my sentence as opposed to building a sentence around the word I have chosen to rhyme with, get me? On the positive note, if you have just started your flow will naturally change up and you will develop a style of writing that suits you, Vocab is important though because there is a certain number of words around so its good to find alternatives and meaning of new words. Good attempt though. Try not to succumb to the cliche of English Rapping though, a lot of people try to sound like others, get me. Once you find your 'voice' as it were you will develop as a rapper and then you can not only have heavy bars but focus on delivery also. Safe

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