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27-01-2008, 08:10 PM	#1
BLAS-THEME Registered User Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 88	Mourning Let all the beef and clashes go for a minute as we take the time to honor those love and have lost....Mine go out to My MOM who went home May 20, 2007 and I am going to post the writes that I have done for her since then, which have been posted on the other sites that I am a member of. To all who join me in this venture, I wish to offer you all my condolences and prayers. Blas

27-01-2008, 08:12 PM	#2
BLAS-THEME Registered User Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 88	My Mother Died Today My Mother Died Today Even now as I sit here at this keyboard through teary eyes My mind going from dimension to event that we've ventured From earliest memories of my mother as a strong beautiful woman My thoughts flash on the many things that I wish to have changed To the many wondrous times of conversations with my mother I sit here numb to the world at large yet calmly focused I wish to share MY MOTHER with the world for she is BEAUTIFUL My mother always had a kind word to say regardless of the situation My mother was LOVE personified withstanding many trials and tribulations I did not always appreciate my mother's love in times of life Even then Our Father, Who Art In Heaven gave me comprehension And hastened to change my heart I have heard it said that when you are at death's door That your life tends to flash before your very eyes Well, I guess that to be true as I sit here even now with my life Flashing as the very being DIED within me I recall the time of speaking to my mother at 2:30 am As I just wanted to talk to her, with nothing particular in mind I called her, and she awoke to speak with me, And within 20 minutes we were laughing and joking as though It were only 2;30 in the afternoon My Mother Just Died Today and I wanted to share her life with THE WORLD I tribute who I am TODAY to MY MOTHER My gift for POETRY/RHYMES/MUSIC ALL to her When I had no idea of the gift that I possessed and just started Naturally creating both rhymes and writing poetry, I had no idea Until a time that my brother and my mother and I were on the phone And my mother told us of how she used to recite poetry From off the top of her head, it blew my mind and made me proud These are just some thoughts that I wished to share about my mother Even today, the day of her passing, Mom was just as OUTSTANDING As ever… Let me explain this,…you see my brother just got out of the military today He had arrived home today about 11am this morning My mother was her usual loving self as she was going to fix Something for him to eat, but he declined So, they sat talking for some time as my mother was on the couch She told my brother that she did not know what was coming over her She was getting dizzy, and then MY MOTHER PASSED AWAY TODAY Through tear filled eyes I share my mother with the World… MOM, I LOVE YOU 05-20-07

27-01-2008, 08:15 PM	#3
BLAS-THEME Registered User Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 88	Comprehending Love Comprehending Love 06-07-07 4:20 pm just beginning this Comprehending Love Sentences could never equate to the awesome power plus great energy My body's still adjusting as mentally WE complete the synergy Physically my MOM's gone but HERE inside the Inner Me She resides and exists and makes sure that the winner's Lee Any competition opponents are simply out-classed Flows so quick my knuckles caught a wind friction blast Skin's off the fore finger as the velocity almost drew blood But MOM said "Hold on son, Just a little further bud!" Mom as my inspiration what more can I say I know love from the spiritual release of My Mother and I'm showered in her Love Spray Each and every day second to second even when I can't sleep My mind's functioning different now, calmer and thoughts, more deep Comprehending the fact that the physical withheld things Release the soul to the essence look at what opening the shell brings She took me as close to the edge as she could possibly allow I wanted to go further with her, but she said "No Son, not now" "All things in time as your time will surely come" Now here I sit crying again Blessed with her Love but feeling NUMB... finished at 4:32 pm 7 June 07 12 minutes to write Tribute to My Mother who helped me with this, and gave her ALL Copyright 2007

27-01-2008, 08:19 PM	#4
BLAS-THEME Registered User Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 88	Never Far Away Never Far Away Conceived from love, Mom, you gave the very best that you had to give A willing and helping hand to all, throughout the years that you lived A true friend, advisor, good wife, as our dad will attest There are many good women of the world, but Mom, you were truly the very best The gathering here today does not show all of those whose lives you have really touched Those not in attendance send their prayers as their blessings are offered up The many smiles that you've shared with friends, acquaintances, and family alike Have forged strong feelings in the heart, even now you're still in sight Forever in our hearts and minds, never to be put away We all love you very deeply, and we know you're never far away Though the tears may fall as we accept your journey homeward bound We celebrate your days of life, as our togetherness will come back around So weep not out of sorrow, for this is truly a joyful day Though our mother, dad's wife, has left the physical, she's never far away Copyright © 2007 All Rights Reserved

27-01-2008, 10:06 PM	#5
I-RoNiK Registered User Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 498	These are deep, and I know how true every word that you say is. here are a few I wrote about my time... was more about me I guess bt the way It affected me. Let me know what you think? you have some hot talent. mum i wish you made it to my 17th birthday if it was down to me you wouldnt have left in the first place i know i can't change sh*t ma, i guess things could be worse for what if you lived an it was me in dat hearse? what if i left you, an broke ya heart like you broke mine? could ya live witout me? or would ya turn to the wine? could ya cope without my presence, and the nights I came home late? maybe you'd be hurt like me - but put it all down to fate? cuz maybe life is jus a game we play without the instructions that is ended by death with jus one act of destruction a failure of the heart, has left me lookin for answers- closed off into a world where i wont take any chances if it was me you saw in bed that day, lifeless, ya last breath already taken would you have screamed like me? or double checked you weren't mistaken? all these questions unanswered they got my tears makin tracks the fact is that your gone ma and your not comin back- so i accept i chose this life and this was jus meant to be- an to be a stronger person those sights I jus had to see- startin over with a new philosophy- im gonna live my life, my way an set myself free.

27-01-2008, 10:08 PM	#6
I-RoNiK Registered User Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 498	i stop for a moment an try to regain my flow then it crosses my mind,sht where did these years go? it's been 2 already, can't believe that i've made it- but i managed to pull through and i wouldn't trade it -coz i learnt some valuble lessons- an since we're here, i think it's time that i share my confessions... ma i write to you about my time since you've left i feel i need to do this coz ders sht on my chest i need to rest, put all my thoughts and fears to sleep i need to live again, ma it's my turn to reap i start to weep, my tears are makin the ink run i can't take it, my eyes- they don't even blink none, so i fake it, by turnin to my henry of green i know drugs ain't the answer, but sometimes dats how it seems been workin every hour god sends me, im beat an whass it come to? im smokin joints up my street i cant believe it, i really thought i was through this but i'm strong, yeah, i know i can do this im gonna prove it, be in control of my life i got behind the wheel and now i'm learnin to drive sad you couldnt be here to SEE my first car cuz no matter how much i drive you'll always BE-TOO-FAR

27-01-2008, 10:09 PM	#7
I-RoNiK Registered User Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 498	so ima tell a story bout a girl i once knew/ take a breath. listen up. are ya ready? one... two.... a good friend of mine this 16 year old girl she stood before me screamin cuz she thought she lost her world young didn't know where to turn so drugs helped her cope an they helped her to learn that when you burn, ya life still continues jus a short term me-mo-ry loss of what she been thru i seen thru her shell i guess dats why she turned to me but i turned her back so she asked "aren't you concerned for me?" an typical me a let silence do the talkin left my phone off the hook and let my feet do the walkin so she suffers alone got no1 left to confide in only a bottle of wine nights in, drinkin her pride, sin always knew how to get the best of her but it neva quite figured out just how to get the rest of her this life is a test for her shes been blessed with the jest in her writes to get off her chest so fightin is a quest for her still depressed she turns to god with her questions willin to listen to every one of his suggestions so she gets on her knees at night an she begs an she prays for someone to tell her why her mama went away at such a young age standin alone on this stage emotionally drained as all her strength turns to rage "fck you god, fck the place you call heaven" gold plated gates an a stairway thats never endin shes an insomniac another quarter past eleven awake right thru the night awake twenty-four-seven a.m, p.m can't find a way to feel better all these fckin words are just a way to forget her so she reaches for her pen an starts to write her a letter she mentions the weather an how it's only gettin wetter told her bout all the times she been missin how she would visit their favourite place an spend time reminiscin sit up wishin she would wake from this nightmare jokes that now she's an angel is it true she'll have white hair? an now there's a void where her mother once stood her dad drinks the day away her brotha knows he could grans gettin old but her hearts in the right place wonders if she'll eva live to see her fckin weddin day or her first granchild bad enuf she neva gonna see the way her mam smiled an this girl finds it hard to express all her emotions i ain't seen her lately but i heard she's cryin oceans i wonder if you worked it out.. it's really plain to see this girl i knew...been talkin bout.. well.. really it's me

27-01-2008, 11:27 PM

BLAS-THEME

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Posts: 88

Yeaaa

I did figure that it was you, and the writing, the context, the build-up is phenomenal...you are a very good writer...I both enjoyed and mourned with you as I felt your emotions pour forth..Neva stop writing! and Neva let anyone make u think you cant do whatever it is that you want to do!!

SAFE!!!!!

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Originally Posted By: I-RoNiK

so ima tell a story bout a girl i once knew/
take a breath. listen up. are ya ready? one... two....

a good friend of mine this 16 year old girl
she stood before me screamin cuz she thought she lost her world
young didn't know where to turn
so drugs helped her cope an they helped her to learn
that when you burn, ya life still continues
jus a short term me-mo-ry loss of what she been thru

i seen thru her shell i guess dats why she turned to me
but i turned her back so she asked "aren't you concerned for me?"
an typical me a let silence do the talkin
left my phone off the hook and let my feet do the walkin

so she suffers alone got no1 left to confide in
only a bottle of wine nights in, drinkin her pride, sin
always knew how to get the best of her
but it neva quite figured out just how to get the rest of her
this life is a test for her shes been blessed with the jest in her
writes to get off her chest so fightin is a quest for her

still depressed she turns to god with her questions
willin to listen to every one of his suggestions
so she gets on her knees at night an she begs an she prays
for someone to tell her why her mama went away
at such a young age standin alone on this stage
emotionally drained as all her strength turns to rage

"f*ck you god, f*ck the place you call heaven"
gold plated gates an a stairway thats never endin
shes an insomniac another quarter past eleven
awake right thru the night awake twenty-four-seven
a.m, p.m can't find a way to feel better
all these f*ckin words are just a way to forget her

so she reaches for her pen an starts to write her a letter
she mentions the weather an how it's only gettin wetter
told her bout all the times she been missin
how she would visit their favourite place an spend time reminiscin
sit up wishin she would wake from this nightmare
jokes that now she's an angel is it true she'll have white hair?

an now there's a void where her mother once stood
her dad drinks the day away her brotha knows he could
grans gettin old but her hearts in the right place
wonders if she'll eva live to see her f*ckin weddin day
or her first granchild bad enuf she neva gonna see the way her mam smiled

an this girl finds it hard to express all her emotions
i ain't seen her lately but i heard she's cryin oceans
i wonder if you worked it out.. it's really plain to see
this girl i knew...been talkin bout.. well.. really it's me
”

02-02-2008, 02:10 PM	#9
I-RoNiK Registered User Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 498	Safe man fanx for the support, yeah i guess it's pretty obvious like but i liked the idea of tryn to write sumfin from a different perspective. I more of a writer then a mc as such, i just like to write in rhymes and metaphors! yeah fanx man, i love writing but i cud neva make a career of it. anyway heres somfin more recent i just came across.... Another monday morning, another week to begin/ stuck at another crossroads wonderin if we gonna win?// another murder on the news, another kid gettin snatched/ it ain't lookin good, so it's best to detatch// I cut my ties with the world, and that A$$hole up above/ For everyone he's taken from my life, that I love// Now i'm seeing red just finking bout what he's done/ but my anger turns to hate, and then the hate turns me numb// I got no feelin, not when I think how it was/ turned into fcking tin man from the wizard of oz// an people wonder why I keep myself to myself/ tell em, "I ain't a fckin packet, I don't belong on a shelf"// I got no wealth, so love is all I rely on/ but never know when i'm right, so i'll always deny wrong// see I had no guidance, since that day I lost my mother/ that's why I always try to see past the bad in others// fuK cars, fuk money, can't you see the perspective?/ People gettin confused about the game of life's objectives// Coz most of us wanna get rich or die trying/ Oblivious to the flame of life/ the light's dying// burning out every day, this time should be about family/ but un-fortu-nat-ly, the rule-book isn't down-to-me// so play on, but please take note of my words/ cuz in this game they gonna be the best you've ever heard//

08-02-2008, 10:41 AM	#10
r_double_b Registered User Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 154	bless 1 real deep goin on R.I.P J.Denzel, Remer Kid, Kisan il drop later

22-02-2008, 12:48 PM	#11
MUSKK_2008 Registered User Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 144	Ironik N Blas Ur Bars R Deep Man I'll Type Up Myn N My Mates R.i.p Bars Soon R.i.p Rhianna Gone Buh Neva Forgotten .. Musk .. Stay Blesssedddd X

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