Lost In Mind..Hope In Soul /Rate

Ex_Calibur

Ight Looking For Feed ... Kinda Small But hoping To get Another 1-2 Verses In this ... Lookin For first FeedBack...

Leakin' Pores Like A Tap..So Enclosed..Like He Caught ina Trap..
Mind so Frail he Wonders How he Express' Thoughts into Rap..
The Stautus similar To 'Hittin Brick Wall's'..''Crouching So Tall''..
Apperarence Wounded..Mind and Tone Exhibiting it All..
Lifeless, His Thick Skulled..Feel's Dull Till Death Do them Part..
Mind Surge..Concluses Nothing, Brainwaves With A'z In Misleading Arts..
Extinguishing Hope, Sensless Left Alight As a Flame is Shared..
Vison'z Impaired..Light at 'End of the Tunnel' Flickering In Squares..
Complexion Prevented, Anger Directed at A Different Perception..
Perfection Ejected..Soul and Hope Presenting a Distictive Projection..
The Gravest of Fault's..Thoughts' Disillusioned, Disoluted in Caves..
Shared Negativity..Hope 'n' Expectation Swept Away With The Waves..
A Mere Lantern Ablaze..All that Illuminates The End Of this Path..
Left Feeling The Wrath..The Storm 'Set in' Acheing In No Forseeable Past..

odp

flows well....have no idea what motivTED u to write about this..but its koo

ue got the tempo goin...an that the key..good verse