Kaine's Rage

[kd0t]

Just storage for some lyrics, may as well put them up.

No one needs to post in here unless you have some intelligent criticism or feedback.

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I stay consistent in these sentences, cos I'm trying to drop intelligence/
but I find the words are perilous, without a worthy nemesis//
~want evidence? just check the viciousness I battle with/
Gain focus like the Matrix, a Trinity of mind pen and script//

But in the wake of a battle, Kaine aims for consciousness/
Have to grapple to pin down the thoughts my minds responding with//
Pause and think lines orphaned, switched to reduce the awkwardness/
Because unless its pain, the brain stay's, a long way from Nautilus//

So until I am equipped for peace, if its war answer the calling swift/
Still feel i should caution kids, sh"t emcee's, cause public disturbances//
Rather they improve their verse a bit, make it worth the words I writ'/
instead its an armoured pandemic, claims of sickness and loaded clips//

[BornNBredPothed]

yer quite good chuck quite good indeed no comment tho asfar as con crit tho