Just a little somthin, RATE IT.

KRYSIZ MC

Yo check it...


Before 21 Seconds you didnt have a clue/
Tha only garage you knew were tha So Solid Crew/
Run around makin $$$$ chats all day/
Bout "Check it out man this a lyric I made"/
"I'M A MC YOU CANT TEST ME/
I'M TOO HEAVY I'M TOO MESSY"/
Nobody wanted to hear that $$$$ man/
My own nan can rave a club more than you can/
A lyrical flow ain't just words that all ryhme/
It's about makin sence plus it's all about time/
Heared bare people try betterin mine/
All they chat about is how they is "Blowin your mind"/
$$$$in' your gal, or they robbin you clean/
You don't even do it what tha $$$$ do ya mean/
Bout "I'm a lyrical pro bare man's they dunno"/
Your usin tha same $$$$ty verse in each flow.




Sometimes I feel evil for no reason/
Sometimes I feel nice I change like a season/
Spring 2 Summer is like good 2 bad/
It's like 2 different minds dat inside ma head/
I can be bad then go safe and stay clean/
It feels like it's me, myself and Irene/
Like Incredible Hulk but without the green/
1 mind say's say "no" tha other wants 2 get lean/
If I could either stay good or stay bad/
I'd try to stay good but i'd have to go back/
To a life of crime, drugs thugs and guns/
I couln't stay clean I'd get mean at least once/
I even once thought about turnin to lead/
But none of my minds would be here if i'm dead/
Guess i'll just have accept and put up/
With a mind that cares but then don't give a $$$$.


And my sig, check dat aswell.

MC Makka

Yeah bruv i do rate u - u got msn or suming?

*Lady_Krispi*

Yeh i like the 1st one & ya sig!!

geenius

3/10

SUPERSTAR SINISTA

no offence bro but im not really feelin the first 2.

the one in your sig is aight just for a joke ting.

geenius

na not really feeling it either ,juss being ohnest bruv

Fidel Castro

*walks into thread & drops verse*

my thoughts are so unclear, my souls pitch black, like night/
no longer do i believe, in white being pure & showin itself as the light/
personality is so confused, it begins to choke thru the accumination of dust/
my body no longer wants to move, its like it's fallen to the erosion of rust/
let the devil take me, as my demons have led to the dismise of my life/
just end it will u? coz i can't take much more of personal strife/
the happy young kid who always wore a smile/
now looks in the mirror & see's a person who makes him vile/
people, who i do care bout, i end up hurtin/
i close up on them, like the drawin of a the curtin/
will i ever snap out of depression? i don't really know/
it seems everyone is watch my life unfold like the truman show/
wakin up everynite in a cold sweat & a shiver/
shakin so badly i've dislodged my liver.

*walks back out of thread*

KRYSIZ MC

k.

mc_saber

dis is how it drops yea, crisis, i aint up for lipsin mans bum but i rate u, plain and simple, dat 2nd chat bout the minds was 2 much, so all i'm sayin is hold it up rude boy cause if people aint feelin dat chat then dey br crazy

lady phoenix

i think it was gud still

Mc Ice/Icy~b

fidel im feeling the deep side...its better than most of your lyrics ive seen because you were being more creative rather than making up something youve never been through in life and if you did it just sounds plain pitiful and boring....nice id like to see more of this style from you its nice