jus the 3 of us... 3 verses, please jus leave feedback

Jaycus

got twin babies aat 6 month so here i go...

when u was concieved, i found out it was unexpected...
not in a bad way but daddy couldnt accept it..
cos i was shocked when i thought there was 1 alone..
but when mummy told me there was 2 of u i couldnt cope..
i fort my life was over i was only 20 years old...
i wasnt ready for my life story to be told..
im glad i never ran, true definition of a man..
tried to take mummy to hospital for every scan..
never showed it but i was exited by them scan pics..
got used to ya quick, an absent dad is a $$$$$..
some people are unlucky and dont have a single kid in their lifes...
but for some reason i got lucky, i get the same kid twice..

i remember the 1st time i saw u both, i was calm..
5 week early and i could fit u both in my palms..
i thank the lord god for blessin me with u both..
i swear if u get $$$$ed with then that guy is gettin chocked..
i know that you both are just 2 young dudes..
but when i look at you 2 i see me in you..
even though u was early couldnt wait to get you home...
when you arrived daddy spend hours on the phone..
tellin family and friends that you've both arrived..
its no lie, i wanted to cry.
i was happy to see the live that i gave them..
now i got 2 sons named cameron and jayden...

now no matter what happens in my life just dont care..
as long as i stay out of jail and my kids no im there..
thats all that matters, used to think life was for me and no other..
now i gotta make a life for my son and his twin brother....
but babies dont be mad if daddy ever has to shout...
cos i got shouted at and thats how i want u 2 to turn out..
1 min u buy u clothes, the next ya clothes dont fit...
you growin faster than when mummy egg split..
i know ya both only 6 month old, and im told...
that the younger ages are the best but cant wait till u get old...
so we can do more stuff together, i'll tell ya now..
football, fishin, cyclin.... ill show u how...

not got a chorus yet but will have soon, what ya think?