Joe Buddens vs Eminem vs I-ronik....

I-RoNiK

ok this might be real dodgy, but SING FOR THE MOMENT is my fave song ever.. an last night i managed to download the joe buddens remix, in which he has rapped the first verse.. then eminem does the last 2 verses, but I thought it would be cool to try an rewrite the last verse... so here's what a come up with....

(BTW the joe buddens lyrics are not 100% right i dont think coz i was jus typin em up from lisnin 2 d song an it was hard 2 make out wat e was sayin!)

>>>>>>>>>>>>> JOE BUDDENS

[Now first things first mutha$$$$a I DON'T KNOW YOU/
and if put it into AIR/ it be CLEAR/ that I DON'T OWE YOU/
nobody wants to start out from scratch but they on ........./
they'd rather BLOW YOU/ bring you to places you DON'T GO TO/
the bad guy/ cuz I refuse to remain LOCAL/
I beef wit da people that think KNOW TOO/ cuz im the VOCAL/
I dont deal wit u DUDES/ who seem to think I got my deal out the BLUE/
4 years ago $$$$ I was feelin like YOU/
wi 5 buttons to my name/ rips n tears in my SHOE/
borrowin OUTFITS/ no food starvin das mouth $$$$/
but now the mouths ON/ $$$$$z act like the kitchen OVEN/
didn't used to keep the whole house WARM/ i was widout PORN
I aint accept my FLAWS/ beggin a dealer for a hit like/ PLEASE just accept my SHORTS/
not in mind/ set in my DRAWERS/ they pack me a LOSS/
misGUIDED/ KID/ HOPELESS they MISQUOTED/ mutha$$$$a/]


>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> EMINEM

[entertainment is CHANGIN/ intertwinin wit GANGSTAS/
in the land of the KILLERS/ a SINNERS mind is a SANCTUM/
HOLY or UNHOLY/ ONLY have ONE HOMEY/
ONLY this GUN/ LONELY/ cuz DON'T anyONE KNOW ME/
but everybody just feels like they can RELATE/
I guess WORDS are a mutha$$$$a they can be GREAT/
or they can DEGRATE/ or even worse they can TEACH HATE/
is like dese KIDS hang on every single STATEMENT WE MAKE/
like dey WORSHIP US/ plus all da stores SHIP US PLATINUM/
now how the $$$$ did THIS METAMORPHOSIS HAPPEN/
from standing on CORNERS and PORCHES JUST RAPPIN/
to havin a FORTUNE/ no MORE KISSIN ASS/
but then these CRITICS cruicify you/ journalists try to BURN YOU/
fans TURN ON YOU/ attorneys all want A TURN AT YOU/
to get they HANDS/ on ev-e-ry DIME YOU HAVE/
they want yo to/ LOSE your mind/ every TIME YOU MAD/
so they can try to make you out to look like a LOOSE CANNON/
any DISPUTE/ dont HESISTATE to PRODUCE HANDGUNS/
thats why these prosecutors wanna CONVICT ME/
STRICTLY just to get me offa these STREETS QUICKLY/
but all they kids be lisnin to me RELIGIOUSLY/
so im/ signing cd's while police FINGERPRINT ME/
theyre FOR the judges DAUGHTER/ but his grudge is AGAINST ME/
if im such a $$$$in MENACE THIS $$$$ doesn't make SENSE B?
it's all POLITICIAL/ if ma/ music is LITERAL/ an am a CRIMINAL/
how the $$$$ could i raise a LITTLE GIRL/
i COULDN't i WOULDN'T be FIT TO/
your fulla $$$$ TOO GURERRA/ that was a FIST that HIT YOU/]


>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> IRONIK

[So I slide/ back to REALITY/ cuz/ when i'm in FANTASY
i got NO SENSE of GRAVITY/ tryna find a MAN that CAN HANDLE ME/
MAN i'm a muthaf*ckin FAN TO ME/ RAISE yo muthaf*ckin HANDS FOR ME/ CAN'T YOU SEE/
I love ma muthaf*ckin FAMILY/ but ma/ life like the muthaf*ckin/ AMITYville HORROR/
there's a/ girl cry'n for help but everybody duz IGNORE HER/
REASSURE HER/ she's just losin her MIND/ the PARANOIA it DESTROYS HER/
why's ev-ry-bo-dy so UNKIND?/ so she/ HURTS/ e-motion-al-ly/ SCARRED for LIFE/
she/ PAID THE PRICE/ took a chance on somethin that/ WASN'T RIGHT/
she didn't/ SLEEP all NIGHT/ BEFORE/ sat up writin all A-/BOUT HER WAR/
ha constant battle wiv SOCIETY/ I know her too well/ yeah/ I know she wou'nt LIE TO ME/
she/ CRYS TO ME/ SILENTLY/ I try to FIND HER in MA/ PEACE OF MIND/ I SEE/
her actin so/ VIOLENTLY/ it's so IRONIC/ as she holds herself PEACEFULLY/
she was/ never a FAN of RAP MAGAZINES/ full a $$$$ from RAP CRITICS/
wearin their/ TIGHT ASS JEANS/ they LEAN into your LIVES and WRITE/ NASTY THINGS/
make you BELIEVE that THEY'RE the reason/ WHY you're LIVIN'/
i'd rather/ DIE then LIVE IN/ this HELL but i won't GIVE IN/
to SIN coz you can't WIN/ only tried but i didn't FIT IN/
now searchin for/ someone to LISTEN/ while i'm WISHIN
on stars it's like my MISSION/ IM-POSS-IBLE/ maybe your heart is NOT SO SMALL/ AFTER ALL/
But let me KNOW coz I refuse ta/ LOOK THE FOOL/
in this f*cked up MIND GAME that we PLAYIN/ I broke ALL THE RULES/
said ALL the fings a shouldn't be SAYIN/ ENGAGED/ at a/ YOUNG AGE/
people look at you OBSCENELY/ DEY/ Live in da ICE AGE surrounded by HISTORICAL SCENERY/
look at ME/ like im a FREAK/ 'a the TWENTY FIRST CENTURY/
sniffin COKE/ smells like a muthaf*ckin/ SCENT TO ME/
I SPENT your CENTS on ME/ then I/ LENT you my/ RENT MO-NEY/ but I don't RESENT your BEEF/
So when i'm GONE let me LIVE ON and just REMEMBER ME........]

doubl3_a

lol, wtf? ..

I-RoNiK

well the first 2 verses I didnt write .. but I put em together with my verse to recreate the song!

.. it's like 'pretend' beef! haha

doubl3_a

Well, i can't really flow youre verse, maybe you should do it audio than drop the link? ..i'll do the same ..see who's better

I-RoNiK

yeah I guess to read it is pretty complicated... sounds ok when its bein spit tho...

dunno about puttin up an audio.... lol yeah i write but I don't mc too well I dont fink!!

doubl3_a

That's what this site is for, to improveeeeee ..

I-RoNiK

well you definately right der... dats why I joined!! no point havin a talent an wastin it a guess... well where shall i record it.. on the computer?

doubl3_a

Yea, download cool edit pro 2.0 ...that's what i got ..

I-RoNiK

aight, thanks will go an have a look for it now betcha anythin i'll download even MORE viruses on dis puter!! haha

I-RoNiK

right I just downloaded a program called wave pad.. coz the one u said wudn download, but think it does pretyt much d same fing.. music editing n stuff cant wait to mess about wiv it!!

doubl3_a

Yea, i haven't used wave pad so i'm not sure whats good with it, should still be cool tho ...

I-RoNiK

with the program you have... can you rip the actual lyrics from the background music?? or do you know a program that you can do that on??

doubl3_a

Nah, i can't do that but you probably can somehow ..

nOrTh_WeSt

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nOrTh_WeSt

“	Originally posted by I-RoNiK >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> IRONIK [So I slide/ back to REALITY/ cuz/ when i'm in FANTASY i got NO SENSE of GRAVITY/ tryna find a MAN that CAN HANDLE ME/ MAN i'm a muthaf*ckin FAN TO ME/ RAISE yo muthaf*ckin HANDS FOR ME/ CAN'T YOU SEE/	”

likin this bit n can feel the flow in it

doubl3_a

lol @ editing saying "......." wtf? ...lol

I-RoNiK

lol safe northwest!

ite doubl.... av just bought dis program off ebay!! lol shud av it by 2mo... iz d same cool edit pro 2 woz only £16, sound!

doubl3_a

Only £16? ..deep, you could'a downloaded it off of limewire but i guess it was worth buying, all the options, etc ..you got it for a good price ..usually it's like £400 ..*goes on ebay to find some dope deals* ..

I-RoNiK

£400 ????

maybe it aint an original... woo dat is a gud deal!

check it ....

http://search.ebay.co.uk/cool-edit-pro