j-kid vs smoothe

j-kid1

ight like u sed 10-16 lines yh 2 or 3 drops coz ima lazy $$$$ call my first drop the say as the other one


may the best man win and this is my drop

SMOOTHE YOU DNT RUN THIS FORUM BLAD SO DNT BE FULL-OF-IT-BOUT-TONK
WHEN GUNS CLAP START RUNNING U AINT BULLET-PROOF-LIKE-MONK
COZ BULLETS WILL HIT UR ARMS LEGS CHEST-AND-HEAD
MANZ ROUND THE WAY ARE CRAZY THEY’LL DIG UP AND RE-REST-THE-DEAD
IF YOU TRY AND MAKE A KWIK GET AWAY I SUGGEST U CHECK-UR-PED
COZ THEY’LL TEAR UR BRAKE CALIBERS JUST TO MAKE SURE U BEST-BE-DEAD
AND IF THESE UTES GOT GUNS IN THUR BARS…THEN THEY MUST-BE-SH*T
ABOUT THEY’LL DO DRIVE BY’S UR CAR AINT FAST IT’S A RUSTY-WHIP
I AINT DOWN ON THE WIFEY TING MAN ONLY DOES LUST-N-SH*T
IF THE BOI ACTS LIKE A YANK NAH HE AINT BIG I’LL BUST-HIS-LIP
AND IF YOU WANT TO EAT ME STANDARD FINGS…SHANK-IN-UR-BOAT!!
GO THROO THAT P*SSY’S WALLET AND THEN SHOUT THANKS-FOR-THE-NOTES
BECOZ YU BETTA BELEV IT WHEN I SAY I BIN IN SUM CRAZY-BEEF
SMOOTHE WATCH OUT I'LL SWING ARMS TO KNOCK OUT UR BABY-TEEF
I MEAN SMOOTHE A GREAT LYRICIST NAH REALLY HOOS-HE
WHEN MANZ BUSS HEAT...HE'LL MELT I'LL TURN HIM TO A REAL SMOOTHE

HypNa

aight aight thats cool.......

youve really cheered me up,so i'll say thanks for the laugh
i couldnt tell if that was your verse,or a random paragraph
u see i won this already,actually having structure will phase ya
this battle wouldnt be a close shave,if i actually cut u with a razor
easier 2 break you down than your verse,ur organs internally
i'll suggest that u take urself back and elevate,eternally
im just typin dis real quick,coz i expected u 2 be better
ur sh*t sounded like u was writing me a f*cking love letter
you identical to a females pu55y something you always wish u had
i think ya flow is bleeding my mind i'll give you a lifesize maxipad
u supposed to be a heavy weight? ha ur just new to the game
why view poll results there aint gonna be no 100% by ya name
ur flow is going broke man it needs some reconstruction
u ride so much d*ck u the postaboy for gay reproduction
but im sure he'll come out sayin 'oh that spit is f*cking ill'
but ya only protection against my spit is an oral contraceptive Pill

was a quick rushy ting but hey im bored out of my f*cking head

j-kid1

alright ur sick still but check it

you and grimsly are both the same... a couple-of-bums
i usually air manz like u two out but i can be subtle-to-some
i've seen you playin around with him man always up-in-da-slum
learn to spit to others coz ur only hot-on-ur-ones
i kno shes a crack hore so $$$$ touchin-ur-mum
but i'll be $$$$in ur gurl so hard my $$$$'ll get stuck-in-her-bum
don't think ima push over becoz im not-widda-gun
coz i'll draw for a shank you p*ssy and push it up-in-ur-lungs
push it up.twist it tight and then i'll pull-it-out
i've seen you roll around this forum man and ur full-of-mouf
hype to me...then ur lungs and muscle ima rip-it-all
you manz are all the same you lot are so typical
coz once the nifes to ur throat watch you get all biblical
i'll have u wastemanz doin bare backflips-n-all
but allow kissin ur gurl i'll just give her a penus-ride
ima thug and bin known for comminitng sum heanus-crimes
like gauging a bois eyes out so he was never able to see-his-prime
and the same will happen to you if you come wid tedious-rimes

i kno dats long sorry bout that

HypNa

i aint got time for more drops bro i thought we agreed on just the 1.....i dunno when i can drop the next......if u wanna make it 2 then let me know

j-kid1

o isit my bad finish this then, i'll clash u another tym init i might as well focus on this grimsly one if he's still on it coz he's gone nw

HypNa

yea man thats safe......after this new year period and im settled back in to work i'll battle u again and this time least we both get time to think about our lyrics....mine was all messy

HypNa

anyways.........upping for votes please people

Dr_Grimsly

wheres the poll?

j-kid1

thur is no poll u have to explain it carefully

HypNa

aint no poll any more in battles man.......so people cant just vote......u gotta read the new battle vote thread man

Dr_Grimsly

aaahh $$$$ both your verses were tiight
im voting for smoothe cos his words was just sick
duno how to explain
just sick

but ur lyrics was sick too j kid

this is gonna be a close battle,

i gotta go now got family issues to sort out so cud we carry our battle on tomorrow j kid

j-kid1

yh sure, ight 1-0 to smoothe,; n its funny coz i always fort connecting words together wud be more technical than using big ones but still gud gd

Dr_Grimsly

youve really cheered me up,so i'll say thanks for the laugh
i couldnt tell if that was your verse,or a random paragraph
u see i won this already,actually having structure will phase ya
this battle wouldnt be a close shave,if i actually cut u with a razor
easier 2 break you down than your verse,ur organs internally
i'll suggest that u take urself back and elevate,eternally

bare multi's in that...see it? that first bit just did it for me man
like smoothe said, close shave! lol

you manz are all the same you lot are so typical
coz once the nifes to ur throat watch you get all biblical
i'll have u wastemanz doin bare backflips-n-all
but allow kissin ur gurl i'll just give her a penus-ride
ima thug and bin known for comminitng sum heanus-crimes
like gauging a bois eyes out so he was never able to see-his-prime
and the same will happen to you if you come wid tedious-rimes

that was siiiiick no offence smoothe but that was siiiiick lol
i'd vote for both but my vote goes to smoothe cos his was more tight like
man u know what i mean..

HypNa

that was his 2nd verse we only going 1 verse

j-kid1

which eva one u want to stand ??

HypNa

the first 1 man but if u want u can use that 2nd 1 in the next battle.....but 4 now we stay wit the first verse .......

j-kid1

ight kwl with me star

DarkHorizon

HypNa

it was the first verse man and are u gonna vote properly .....his 2nd verse wasnt part of the battle so take that in note