it aint dat tuff shootin bullets n stuff!!!!!!!

LyRiKaL_G

it aint bout guns n $$$$ trust, read dis!!!!!

u cant stop sumin dats hot/
bullet outta gun burns when its shot/
u can bust a cap but u will get a slap/
wot i say is true 4 a min shut ur trap/

does it appeal 2 drug deal n steal/
carry piece in ur pocket shoot when u feel/
dont think about ur actions jus decimal fractions/
money u make off da transcations/

weigh up ur options wot choice do u make/
carry on wot ur doin soon make mistake/
think of all the hearts ur break/ &
all dem lives ur gona take/

yo,dont try act like life dont mean nothin/
thats y i spit now 2 do sumin/
u giv me ammunition 2 write/
release trigger finger dont keep it tight!!!!!!!!!!!


right now say dat dont make sense!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LyRiKaL_G

wot am i 2 heavy u cant comment come on giv me sum feedback!!!!!!! safe

Sparda

dis is ight...
sin betta...
some lines are pretty wack..

overall... 2.7/5
ight peace-*

LyRiKaL_G

sparda u cant giv a valid opinion cos from wot ive heard bout u ur $$$$in WACK full stop,mumblin n $$$$,that lyrik has meanin,most heads on here who say bout guns n $$$$ aint ever picked 1 up let alone shot 1,end of!!!!!!!

B100D$H0T

yo lyrikal_g i think ure lyrics kinda sik dan, im feelin dem u kno. keep it up bruv! respect!

LyRiKaL_G

yea safe bloodshot least sum ppl knw wots good & wots wack,it aint bout guns trust!!!!!!!!!

Lyrical_Shotter

aite still blood... drop more tho

LyRiKaL_G

i got bout 12 or 13 moreon the same subject, but man aint gona drop $$$$ in a chat room 4 heads 2 copy.....

Lyrical_Shotter

lol... seen, but manz aint gon copy get me

oochie

good topic, Weak weak lines mates,

LyRiKaL_G

so oochie or wotever ya $$$$in name is,lets see u do better i would bun u so easy,everythin in that lyrikz true,example: dont think bout ur actions jus decimal fractions money u make off the transactions/ how is that weak???????????

oochie

calm down calm down!, I ain't a mc, i'm a DJ, but the boys i run with would smack that hard, Dun worry tho cos they are pros, They get paid to mc and no wack garage, proper hip hop, get me, Im just used to proper lyrics thats all,

How old are u, How long u been on the mic?, and don't give me any mo lip.

LyRiKaL_G

that lyric is 4 a reason 2 many heads r chattin bout guns n shootin ppl when they probaly aint ever picked a gun up,if u want rowdy lyrikz then say,i mc in clubs in $$$$ 2 im not jus a bedroom mc!!!!!!!

Lady::Zesta

LOOK matey!!! u think ur lyrics are bashy already!!!
so y u postin dem to get feedback for?
u jus cuss ppl if u dont agree wid dem! u shud think about wot dere sayin instead of runnin ur mout as soon as dey critisize!! jeeez!

Rapid

cheif lyrical_g, $$$$$hole

LyRiKaL_G

rapid shut da $$$$ up,ur a little boy who would get eaten 4 breakfast then spat back out,jus keep practising blud im sure ur get better!!!!!!!!!!!!!! eat ur weetabix it mite help!!!!!!!!!!!

Rapid

LYRIKAL_G, 3 WORDS, $$$$ OFF C-U-N-T, $$$$IN AMETUER RUDEBWOYYYYYYYYY, $$$$$ LMAO $$$$ YOU, UR L8 4 PLAYSKOOL RUN ALONG